Chapter 3

Forever...
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Jessica leaves the bathroom before Tiffany can hold her back.

As Tiffany rush out tries to stop Jessica, she bumps into a person going into the bathroom and drops her purse. The contents rolled out onto the floor.

Tiffany: I'm so sorry! (mutters under her breath) Gosh, I'm so clumsy!

Tiffany pick her things up and then hurries out to stop Jessica. She is just in time to hear Taeyeon's response.

Taeyeon (Unbelievingly): Chincha? She didn't act like it.

Tiffany: Thats 'cus its not true. Sica was making it up. She just has an extremely big mouth.

Jessica (protesting): I do not have a big mouth! It is very normal, komapsumnida.

Taeyeon: Back to the subject at hand... So, if Jessica was making it up, then you do like me?

Tiffany: Mwo?

Taeyeon: Jessica was telling me how you were acting all nice to me before, but that wasn't because you liked me. So, Jessica was making it up? That means you like me? (hopefully, though Tiffany is fuming and doesn't notice)

Jessica grins.

Tiffany: SICA!!!!

Tiffany hits Jessica with her purse.

Jessica: Yah! Don't kill the messenger! You were saying how much you liked her when we were in the bathroom, so I created an opportunity for you!

Tiffany (demanding angrily): When Did I say that I liked her? Is this a conversation you staged? Was I even there when you had this conversation? Or do you just need you ears cleaned so that you can he

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Arkhora-wang #1
Chapter 39: haven't read this story in a while and forgot most of it, time to re-reread everything
Jang91 #2
Looking foward
Jang91 #3
Looking foward
meloveamber
#4
Chapter 39: Finished everything all at once. :D Nice story author!! But I can't help but feel angry at Fany... that was so selfish. D: Good thing Tae's really into her.

P. S. Are you Filipino? I've noticed the "MRT" and "Cathay Pacific Airline". :))
Kookiesundae #5
Chapter 3: after reading just 3 chapters I can already tell that this story is gonna be good. but I don't think I can continue reading because your writing style honestly bothers me. I feel like I'm reading from a script draft. I hope you continue writing though, you seem to be full of ideas. But yeah I think you should work on improving your format so your stories can be enjoyed fully :)

Eg: instead of writing:
'As Tiffany rush out tries to stop Jessica, she bumps into a person going into the bathroom and drops her purse. The contents rolled out onto the floor.
Tiffany: I'm so sorry! (mutters under her breath) Gosh, I'm so clumsy!'

You could've written it like:

' "Oh! I'm so sorry!" Tiffany said after bumping into a stranger. The impact made her drop her open purse. It's contents rolled out onto the floor. "Gosh, I'm so clumsy!" She muttered under her breath while collecting her things. She stood up and rushed Jessica to try and stop her. '

Well yeah something like that at least. I'm not an amazing writer :P hope this helps! :)
Unexpected03
#6
Chapter 38: The story is really Great! Love how everything is not just sweet and cute but also some drama... I was upset and kinda left hanging about the ending though I think the ending is really sweet and I'm happy cause it's happy ending ^^ hehe

It would be really nice if their is a sequel!! Authorssi Daebak!! Thanks!
yoorasone #7
Chapter 1: Author, is it ?
Jessisca2014 #8
Helo!author i like your fanfic about taeny
dingkay09 #9
Chapter 38: nice story author-nim..
Drakey
#10
Chapter 38: o_o SEQUEL!~ SEQUEL!~ WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! o3o