Chapter 24

Forever...
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Jessica and Taeyeon stopped in front of the hotel. They sat in the car. Jessica was waiting for Taeyeon to move.

Taeyeon: I'm not going in there

Jessica: Why not? What are you so afraid of? Are you afraid that I'll prove you wrong? That there's evidence in there that Tiffany didn't actually do anything? Huh?

Taeyeon: I'm not going. You can say what you want to, but I'm not going.

Jessica: Taeyeon, its a win-win situation here. If you go in, and I have nothing to show you, it means you were right. If you go in and I can prove to you that Tiffany was faithful and she didn't do anything with Yuri, then you can go and find Tiffany and apologize and live happily ever after. yadda yadda yadda.

Taeyeon: I'm not going in.

Jessica: Fine. Don't go

Taeyeon: Thats it? No arguments?

Jessica: Nope. Its your relationship. If you can bear to watch Fany get hurt by you, thats fine. If you can stand wondering whether or not I'm right, which, by the way, I always am, you just go right ahead

Taeyeon: She isn't hurt. She's just a really good actress

Jessica: I know Fany, and Fany is hurt and so are you. But both of you are stubborn and you'll never get anywhere if neither of you is willing to shove your pride and step down for a moment.

Taeyeon: Fine, lets go

Jessica: I knew you would. Why else did you drive here?

Taeyeon: Shut up, or I'm not going

Jessica: Fine, I'll shut up, but who's going to prove to you that Tiffany didn't do anything then?

Taeyeon: You can be VERY annoying sometimes, you know that?

Jessica: Araso, Fany tells me that all the time. Now lets go!

Jessica drags a reluctant Taeyeon into the hotel.

They step inside the elevator, Jessica pushes the button for the 30th floor.

Taeyeon takes a deep breath as she and Jessica step out onto the 30th floor. She breathes deeply again at the door.

Jessica: Geez, its no that big of a deal, don't hyperventilate

Taeyeon: Shut up.

Jessica ( tease ): Do you really want me to shut up? Haven't we been through this?

Taeyeon: Dae, I really want you to shut up, but no, don't shut up.

Jessica: Okay

Jessica opens the door and they walk in. lying on the floor is a shattered flower vase that Taeyeon had tried to throw at Yuri.A few drops of blood stain the carpet nearby. Everything else is neat and organized.

Jessica: Now, did you actually see Tiffany do anything with Yuri?

Taeyeon: I didn't need to. they-

Jessica: I'm asking you a simple question. Yes or no?

Taeyeon: Aniyo.

Jessica: So what made you believe that they were doing something?

Taeyeon: I saw them walk in together. Twice

Jessica: Notice anything?

Taeyeon: what do you mean "did I notice anything?"

Jessica: Answer the question

Taeyeon: I noticed my girlfriend walking

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Arkhora-wang #1
Chapter 39: haven't read this story in a while and forgot most of it, time to re-reread everything
Jang91 #2
Looking foward
Jang91 #3
Looking foward
meloveamber
#4
Chapter 39: Finished everything all at once. :D Nice story author!! But I can't help but feel angry at Fany... that was so selfish. D: Good thing Tae's really into her.

P. S. Are you Filipino? I've noticed the "MRT" and "Cathay Pacific Airline". :))
Kookiesundae #5
Chapter 3: after reading just 3 chapters I can already tell that this story is gonna be good. but I don't think I can continue reading because your writing style honestly bothers me. I feel like I'm reading from a script draft. I hope you continue writing though, you seem to be full of ideas. But yeah I think you should work on improving your format so your stories can be enjoyed fully :)

Eg: instead of writing:
'As Tiffany rush out tries to stop Jessica, she bumps into a person going into the bathroom and drops her purse. The contents rolled out onto the floor.
Tiffany: I'm so sorry! (mutters under her breath) Gosh, I'm so clumsy!'

You could've written it like:

' "Oh! I'm so sorry!" Tiffany said after bumping into a stranger. The impact made her drop her open purse. It's contents rolled out onto the floor. "Gosh, I'm so clumsy!" She muttered under her breath while collecting her things. She stood up and rushed Jessica to try and stop her. '

Well yeah something like that at least. I'm not an amazing writer :P hope this helps! :)
Unexpected03
#6
Chapter 38: The story is really Great! Love how everything is not just sweet and cute but also some drama... I was upset and kinda left hanging about the ending though I think the ending is really sweet and I'm happy cause it's happy ending ^^ hehe

It would be really nice if their is a sequel!! Authorssi Daebak!! Thanks!
yoorasone #7
Chapter 1: Author, is it ?
Jessisca2014 #8
Helo!author i like your fanfic about taeny
dingkay09 #9
Chapter 38: nice story author-nim..
Drakey
#10
Chapter 38: o_o SEQUEL!~ SEQUEL!~ WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! o3o