Chapter 2

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Taeyeon went blank when the girl bursts out laughing showing her eye-smile.

Taeyeon, uncertainly: (In broken english) Uh... Is something wrong? I got something my face? (Taeyeon repeats this sentence in korean, trying to find a language the girl understood)

Taeyeon was only reply was more hysterical laughter from the eye-smile girl.

Taeyeon:Er...??? (English)

The eye-smile girl calms down enough to explain.

Girl: (In korean here on, everything is in korean) Jwesonghamnida..

She apologizes amid another fit of laughter.

Girl: Let me explain, where do I start?

Another girl, presumably her friend, walks over.

Girl: Sica, she korean.

Jessica joins her laughter while Taeyeon is still blank.

Jessica: I can't believe this Fany, I ask you to flirt in English and it just happens to be someone who doesn't speak it. You just got extremely lucky.

Taeyeon clears : Erm, could one of you please explain whats so funny here?

Tiffany : Jwesonghamnida( Laugh) I - ( Tiffany takes a deep breath and finally stops laughing) See- um.. well, uh... Ok, lets start simple. Annyeonghaseyo, je ireumeun Tiffany Hwang imnida.. This is my friend Jessica. We're on vacation here in California. The conversation we were having just now is talking about whose english was better. So, Sica told me to prove that I could speak it by flirting with you, but you don't speak it.

Taeyeon went blank again..

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Arkhora-wang #1
Chapter 39: haven't read this story in a while and forgot most of it, time to re-reread everything
Jang91 #2
Looking foward
Jang91 #3
Looking foward
meloveamber
#4
Chapter 39: Finished everything all at once. :D Nice story author!! But I can't help but feel angry at Fany... that was so selfish. D: Good thing Tae's really into her.

P. S. Are you Filipino? I've noticed the "MRT" and "Cathay Pacific Airline". :))
Kookiesundae #5
Chapter 3: after reading just 3 chapters I can already tell that this story is gonna be good. but I don't think I can continue reading because your writing style honestly bothers me. I feel like I'm reading from a script draft. I hope you continue writing though, you seem to be full of ideas. But yeah I think you should work on improving your format so your stories can be enjoyed fully :)

Eg: instead of writing:
'As Tiffany rush out tries to stop Jessica, she bumps into a person going into the bathroom and drops her purse. The contents rolled out onto the floor.
Tiffany: I'm so sorry! (mutters under her breath) Gosh, I'm so clumsy!'

You could've written it like:

' "Oh! I'm so sorry!" Tiffany said after bumping into a stranger. The impact made her drop her open purse. It's contents rolled out onto the floor. "Gosh, I'm so clumsy!" She muttered under her breath while collecting her things. She stood up and rushed Jessica to try and stop her. '

Well yeah something like that at least. I'm not an amazing writer :P hope this helps! :)
Unexpected03
#6
Chapter 38: The story is really Great! Love how everything is not just sweet and cute but also some drama... I was upset and kinda left hanging about the ending though I think the ending is really sweet and I'm happy cause it's happy ending ^^ hehe

It would be really nice if their is a sequel!! Authorssi Daebak!! Thanks!
yoorasone #7
Chapter 1: Author, is it ?
Jessisca2014 #8
Helo!author i like your fanfic about taeny
dingkay09 #9
Chapter 38: nice story author-nim..
Drakey
#10
Chapter 38: o_o SEQUEL!~ SEQUEL!~ WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! o3o