Chapter 22

Forever...
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Tiffany wandered aimlessly for several hours, then, finally noticing her own hunger, walked back to get her car and drive home.

Tiffany turns the key to her flat.

Jessica: Fany? I thought you weren't gonna be home tonight? Weren't you and Taeyeon going to celebrate her birthday.

Tiffany ( sighs ): oh yea, we celebrated all right. ( sarcastically ) It was an all out party.

Jessica: Bwoh? What happened?

Tiffany: Taeyeon followed me to the hotel. She thought i was there with Yuri.

Jessica: Why didn't you explain to her?

Tiffany: She's too angry to listen to anything. I might as well talk to a rock and it would understand better.

Jessica: So what are you going to do?

Tiffany: Let her cool off.

Jessica: And then???

Tiffany: I don't know. This isn't the first time she's been suspicious of me. I thought I explained clearly that I didn't like Yuri. She obviously didn't believe me.

Jessica: Well, what about Yuri?

Tiffany: What about her?

Jessica: Did you just leave her there with Taeyeon?

Tiffany: Dae, wae?

Jessica: Well, she's a goner. So sad that someone as beautiful as her will lose her looks.

Tiffany: What are you talking about?

Jessica: We all know Taeyeon is gonna beat the snot out of her.

Tiffany: No she won't

Jessica: Fany, we've been through this. Taeyeon is a jealous girl. I know what a jealous girl will do. Believe me. Any people who thinks she's been cheated on will take her anger out on any available person.

Tiffany: I really don't need to hear this. I already have too much to think about. I don't

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Arkhora-wang #1
Chapter 39: haven't read this story in a while and forgot most of it, time to re-reread everything
Jang91 #2
Looking foward
Jang91 #3
Looking foward
meloveamber
#4
Chapter 39: Finished everything all at once. :D Nice story author!! But I can't help but feel angry at Fany... that was so selfish. D: Good thing Tae's really into her.

P. S. Are you Filipino? I've noticed the "MRT" and "Cathay Pacific Airline". :))
Kookiesundae #5
Chapter 3: after reading just 3 chapters I can already tell that this story is gonna be good. but I don't think I can continue reading because your writing style honestly bothers me. I feel like I'm reading from a script draft. I hope you continue writing though, you seem to be full of ideas. But yeah I think you should work on improving your format so your stories can be enjoyed fully :)

Eg: instead of writing:
'As Tiffany rush out tries to stop Jessica, she bumps into a person going into the bathroom and drops her purse. The contents rolled out onto the floor.
Tiffany: I'm so sorry! (mutters under her breath) Gosh, I'm so clumsy!'

You could've written it like:

' "Oh! I'm so sorry!" Tiffany said after bumping into a stranger. The impact made her drop her open purse. It's contents rolled out onto the floor. "Gosh, I'm so clumsy!" She muttered under her breath while collecting her things. She stood up and rushed Jessica to try and stop her. '

Well yeah something like that at least. I'm not an amazing writer :P hope this helps! :)
Unexpected03
#6
Chapter 38: The story is really Great! Love how everything is not just sweet and cute but also some drama... I was upset and kinda left hanging about the ending though I think the ending is really sweet and I'm happy cause it's happy ending ^^ hehe

It would be really nice if their is a sequel!! Authorssi Daebak!! Thanks!
yoorasone #7
Chapter 1: Author, is it ?
Jessisca2014 #8
Helo!author i like your fanfic about taeny
dingkay09 #9
Chapter 38: nice story author-nim..
Drakey
#10
Chapter 38: o_o SEQUEL!~ SEQUEL!~ WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! o3o