Chapter 33

Forever...
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In the car...

Tiffany: So, what happened last night?

Taeyeon: what do you mean, what happened?

Tiffany: Why did you lose your cool? Why did the bartender call me telling me you were drunk? Tae, you usually don't drink that much..

Taeyeon: Um...

Tiffany: Look, I may not know what I want right now, but I know what I don't want. I don't want to see you like you were last night. I don't want you to beat yourself up over us. I don't want to see you sad.

Taeyeon: Then be my girlfriend again.

Tiffany: Tae, I've told you what I need. I know its not fair, but you have to give me time. And besides, I know its old fashioned and way overused but "reluctance doesn't bring happiness"

Taeyeon: But you say you love me...

Tiffany is silent

Taeyeon: I won't push you. I'll wait for you to decide, Fany..

Tiffany: Don't do anything stupid again, araso?

Taeyeon: Araso..

Taeyeon pulls up in front of SM studio.

Tiffany: I'll see you later..

Taeyeon: Annyeong..

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Taeyeon, having nothing to do, drove to the harbour to think

She stared out at the ocean, remembering all of the times she and Tiffany had been there together. Everyone seemed to be there in couples. She watched as a particularly loving couple walked and laughed, remembering. They slowly neared her, not noticing her presence. The girl seemed so familiar and Taeyeon tried to think who it could be.

As they walked past, the girl breifly looked at Taeyeon. In that split- second glimpse, Taeyeon knew who it was. She confronted the couple..

Taeyeon: Yul?!

Yuri: Taengoo?

Taeyeon: Sica?! Are the two of you dating?

Jessica: Sh...!!! Why don't you go yell it to the whole world?? Huh? What are you doing here? Sh

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Arkhora-wang #1
Chapter 39: haven't read this story in a while and forgot most of it, time to re-reread everything
Jang91 #2
Looking foward
Jang91 #3
Looking foward
meloveamber
#4
Chapter 39: Finished everything all at once. :D Nice story author!! But I can't help but feel angry at Fany... that was so selfish. D: Good thing Tae's really into her.

P. S. Are you Filipino? I've noticed the "MRT" and "Cathay Pacific Airline". :))
Kookiesundae #5
Chapter 3: after reading just 3 chapters I can already tell that this story is gonna be good. but I don't think I can continue reading because your writing style honestly bothers me. I feel like I'm reading from a script draft. I hope you continue writing though, you seem to be full of ideas. But yeah I think you should work on improving your format so your stories can be enjoyed fully :)

Eg: instead of writing:
'As Tiffany rush out tries to stop Jessica, she bumps into a person going into the bathroom and drops her purse. The contents rolled out onto the floor.
Tiffany: I'm so sorry! (mutters under her breath) Gosh, I'm so clumsy!'

You could've written it like:

' "Oh! I'm so sorry!" Tiffany said after bumping into a stranger. The impact made her drop her open purse. It's contents rolled out onto the floor. "Gosh, I'm so clumsy!" She muttered under her breath while collecting her things. She stood up and rushed Jessica to try and stop her. '

Well yeah something like that at least. I'm not an amazing writer :P hope this helps! :)
Unexpected03
#6
Chapter 38: The story is really Great! Love how everything is not just sweet and cute but also some drama... I was upset and kinda left hanging about the ending though I think the ending is really sweet and I'm happy cause it's happy ending ^^ hehe

It would be really nice if their is a sequel!! Authorssi Daebak!! Thanks!
yoorasone #7
Chapter 1: Author, is it ?
Jessisca2014 #8
Helo!author i like your fanfic about taeny
dingkay09 #9
Chapter 38: nice story author-nim..
Drakey
#10
Chapter 38: o_o SEQUEL!~ SEQUEL!~ WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! o3o