Chapter 12

Forever...
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Tiffany, Taeyeon and Jessica had finished for lunch. And immediately afterwards, Tiffany grabbed her dress and makeup from her room and ran into the bathroom.

Jessica laughs: Taeyeon, You won't see her again until its time for the party...

Taeyeon: I guess I'll head home and change. I'll be back later to pick Fany up.

Jessica: And me! You've gotta pick me up too, remember???

Taeyeon: Yah! I said you could go, not crash our date, get your own ride...

Jessica: How exactly am I supposed to know where I'm going if you don't take me, ( sarcastically ) Genius?

Taeyeon ( sighs ): Araso araso... I come and pick Fany and you up later....

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The doorbell rings.

Jessica gets up to answer the door, yelling : Fany-ah!!! Come out of the bathroom... Your Taetae is here...

Jessica opens the door: Come in Taeyeon, Fany will be out eventually. And, if she's not, you can always break down the door.

Taeyeon looks at Jessica

Jessica: Fany is standing behind me isn't she?

Taeyeon nods.

Tiffany hits Jessica with a couch cushion.

Jessica: Yah! You just screwed up my hair!! I'm going to the party too you know ( Pout )..

Tiffany ( laughs ): Its not like the hair made you any more presentable.

Jessica: I'm gonna let that one slide cus I wanna go to the party and if I say anything bad about you Taeyeon won't let me go...

Taeyeon: Glad you know that Sica, Fany-ah, Lets go!

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At the party...

Jessica immediatel

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Arkhora-wang #1
Chapter 39: haven't read this story in a while and forgot most of it, time to re-reread everything
Jang91 #2
Looking foward
Jang91 #3
Looking foward
meloveamber
#4
Chapter 39: Finished everything all at once. :D Nice story author!! But I can't help but feel angry at Fany... that was so selfish. D: Good thing Tae's really into her.

P. S. Are you Filipino? I've noticed the "MRT" and "Cathay Pacific Airline". :))
Kookiesundae #5
Chapter 3: after reading just 3 chapters I can already tell that this story is gonna be good. but I don't think I can continue reading because your writing style honestly bothers me. I feel like I'm reading from a script draft. I hope you continue writing though, you seem to be full of ideas. But yeah I think you should work on improving your format so your stories can be enjoyed fully :)

Eg: instead of writing:
'As Tiffany rush out tries to stop Jessica, she bumps into a person going into the bathroom and drops her purse. The contents rolled out onto the floor.
Tiffany: I'm so sorry! (mutters under her breath) Gosh, I'm so clumsy!'

You could've written it like:

' "Oh! I'm so sorry!" Tiffany said after bumping into a stranger. The impact made her drop her open purse. It's contents rolled out onto the floor. "Gosh, I'm so clumsy!" She muttered under her breath while collecting her things. She stood up and rushed Jessica to try and stop her. '

Well yeah something like that at least. I'm not an amazing writer :P hope this helps! :)
Unexpected03
#6
Chapter 38: The story is really Great! Love how everything is not just sweet and cute but also some drama... I was upset and kinda left hanging about the ending though I think the ending is really sweet and I'm happy cause it's happy ending ^^ hehe

It would be really nice if their is a sequel!! Authorssi Daebak!! Thanks!
yoorasone #7
Chapter 1: Author, is it ?
Jessisca2014 #8
Helo!author i like your fanfic about taeny
dingkay09 #9
Chapter 38: nice story author-nim..
Drakey
#10
Chapter 38: o_o SEQUEL!~ SEQUEL!~ WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! o3o