Chapter 37

Forever...
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Tiffany [ I'm too late? NO! Tae, you were supposed to be okay. We're supposed to get back together. Just like cinderella, you were supposed to bring me back my slipper, or like sleeping beauty or snow white, you're supposed to wake me up. Tae, you can't leave me! This can't happen] (to the doctor): How did it happen?

Doctor: The patient bled to death because the bullet struck her aortic artery. We couldn't do anything to save her.

Tiffany: Bullet wound? I thought Taeyeon was hit by a car?

Doctor: Taeyeon? Miss, are you sure you have the right room?

Tiffany looks at the door number and realizes its the wrong one, 9D, in her hurry, she had not read the number correctly : Doctor, I think I do have the wrong room, could you tell me where room 9B is?

Doctor: Certainly. its down the hall and to your left..

Tiffany manages to say thank you before rushing down the hall. She takes a deep breath in front of room 9B before letting herself in.

Inside the room, Taeyeon lies on the bed connected to a respiratory system and with a heart monitor emitting steady beeps. Tiffany moves to sit beside her..

Tiffany ( whispers while she starts to cry ): Please be okay Tae, just be okay. I'm sorry for everything. You have no idea how scared I was when I heard you were in a car accident. Why were you drinking again? Was it because of me? Tae, I'm not even worth it. why would you want a girlfriend whose so afraid to commit to you that she just gives up? Thats what it was Tae. I was scared..

Tiffany: The first major relationship I'v

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Arkhora-wang #1
Chapter 39: haven't read this story in a while and forgot most of it, time to re-reread everything
Jang91 #2
Looking foward
Jang91 #3
Looking foward
meloveamber
#4
Chapter 39: Finished everything all at once. :D Nice story author!! But I can't help but feel angry at Fany... that was so selfish. D: Good thing Tae's really into her.

P. S. Are you Filipino? I've noticed the "MRT" and "Cathay Pacific Airline". :))
Kookiesundae #5
Chapter 3: after reading just 3 chapters I can already tell that this story is gonna be good. but I don't think I can continue reading because your writing style honestly bothers me. I feel like I'm reading from a script draft. I hope you continue writing though, you seem to be full of ideas. But yeah I think you should work on improving your format so your stories can be enjoyed fully :)

Eg: instead of writing:
'As Tiffany rush out tries to stop Jessica, she bumps into a person going into the bathroom and drops her purse. The contents rolled out onto the floor.
Tiffany: I'm so sorry! (mutters under her breath) Gosh, I'm so clumsy!'

You could've written it like:

' "Oh! I'm so sorry!" Tiffany said after bumping into a stranger. The impact made her drop her open purse. It's contents rolled out onto the floor. "Gosh, I'm so clumsy!" She muttered under her breath while collecting her things. She stood up and rushed Jessica to try and stop her. '

Well yeah something like that at least. I'm not an amazing writer :P hope this helps! :)
Unexpected03
#6
Chapter 38: The story is really Great! Love how everything is not just sweet and cute but also some drama... I was upset and kinda left hanging about the ending though I think the ending is really sweet and I'm happy cause it's happy ending ^^ hehe

It would be really nice if their is a sequel!! Authorssi Daebak!! Thanks!
yoorasone #7
Chapter 1: Author, is it ?
Jessisca2014 #8
Helo!author i like your fanfic about taeny
dingkay09 #9
Chapter 38: nice story author-nim..
Drakey
#10
Chapter 38: o_o SEQUEL!~ SEQUEL!~ WE WANT MORE! WE WANT MORE! o3o