Mr.Heart

Dont leave me !!!

Hi there ~ it's been long time since i updated hope u guys havent forgotten abt me ^^ and one more thing . 100% MV IS GREAT . HAVE U GUYS SEEM IT ?? COME ON JUST TRY TO WATCH IT ONE TIME . ok i'll stop it now ^^ so here is chapter 7 ^^ enjoy it !!!

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Chanhee's POV
We walked back to club with that impolite boy walked behind me . "When we run before it didnt take that much time but walk will take alot of time "i talk to myself. Suddently i felt somebody pull me and push me in a taxi .
" Ljjang Club please !" at that time i realeased that Byunghun ssi told the driver . I turn to his side and find out he was looking out of the window and there is lonely feeling around him . "He is thinking abt something ,?" I talk to myself I dont wanna distrust him so i keep silience why i can forgive him this easy after all his bad behavior?? I dont know why but i wanna stay by his side and erased all those lonely feeling around him. I wanna embraced him ..... What is wrong with me ??


Byunghun's POV
He start walking back . "Is he really wanna walk there ?? Is he lost his mind ?? It's really far from the club" i think . I pulled his hand and push him in to a taxi
"Ljjang club please "
After that i look out of the window . I knew he wanna say something but stop when he saw me looking out of the window . I surly wanna protect this boy . Since my Noona pass away i never have this kind of feeling . The feeling of cherish something or exactly someone . What with that boy ?? How can he make an emtionless person like me feel like this . How could he did this to me ?????

- At Ljjang Club -
" Run away with that boy ?? What wrong with that Hyung ?? Is he crazy ?? Leave us here and run away ?? He is never like this." Niel pout
" Calm down Hyung . He is always like that . He does thing that he like without any reason. We got used to it right?? " Jonghyun said
" i know but this time is really weird  run away with a boy ?? Have u seem that boy face?? "
" Hello Hyung ~ i was busy at that time "
"Fortunately the security came in time if i got one punch on my fab face i'll cut all those guys's head"
"U can do it??? For sure?? "
Jonghyun teased
"YAH~ DONT MAKE FUN OF ME !!!"
"Ok ok mianh Niel ssi "
"YAH ~ WHERE IS HYUNG ?? I'M YOUR HYUNG REMEMBER THIS CHOI JONGHYUN !!!"
"Ok ok Hyung ..... Niel Hyung "
Jonghyun laughing hardly again.
"Btw where is that troublesome Hyung ?? Where could he take that boy to ?? He got a few punch in his face thise boys will surly dead when he is back " Niel said
"I have no idea. He never do something like normal person and i tottaly agree with u Hyung they will all dead  " with that the two of them laughing with each other

Byunghun's POV
We reached that Club after 30min by taxi . We will take more than an hour to reach there just by our foot . what an idoit. When we reach there i saw two boys laughing like crazy there . They stop laughing and look at me
"Look!! Mr . Trouble is here !! Hyung how can u leave us here in that stuation ??" Niel asked
"I know u guys can handle it . After all u guys never lost when we were in America b4" i replied with cold tone
"Yeah u are right but at least u need to stay by our side .... You are the oldest one after all " Jonghyun added
"Why ?? U knew i got punch on my face just because this man here " i pointed to Niel " too much excited with his trip to London even he already travelled around alot "
The two of them keep silience and Niel said with his head hang down
"Mian i'll be more careful next time "
"I dont blame u . After all we are coursin. And i got alot of troubles too . U guys always stay with me . Thanks"

I can see their eyes wide open with my words . Is it that weird ?? I asked myself
"You are that cute boy's Hyung ??" Jonghyun yell bring me back to the reality and i heard Chanhee said
"You know me ?? " Chanhee asked with question eyes
" who is 'that cute boy' ?? Why u know him?? " after asking i relized that Jonghyun knew something . He is about to answer my question before but i cut it off
" i knew your answer but why u know abt it?? "
" Niel Hyung and me was eating in their coffee shop where this lovely Hyung work . And we met that cute boy who talked with me on the phone this morning then he told us that his Hyung i mean this cute Hyung saved u . That's all "
Jonghyun said while pointing to Chanhee
" why u guys didnt tell me ?? "
" we didnt have a chance to tell u . U are not in good mood when we met "
Niel said . I understand all of this now .
"Where is the manager ??" I asked
"Inside Hyung . He is talking with those guys b4. They wanna call the police . They surly dont know who u are Hyung " Niel said . Chanhee wanna say somthing all the time but i keep him silience by cut him off all the time and before he can say again I pulled him with me without talk anything .

Chanhee 's POV
"what is wrong with this guy?? He didnt let me talk anything and suddently pulled me . What a weird boy . But right now around him not just lonely feeling anymore . It's also have a cold feeling. Is he really has a cold heart ?? I wonder what happened with him b4 . I wanna know all abt him i wanna be closer to him . My heart is pouting hard and my body feel hot now just by holding his hand . Am i sick ?? " i think . I heard somebody talking
"What do u guys want??  Money ?? " Byunghun said . The manager stand up immediately when he saw Byunghun . He wanna say something but Byunghun stopped him .
"U are that boy before ?? What a stubborn little boy!! U wanna be punch again huh?? U said money ?? Do u have that much money to pay for all of this little boy ?? " that man walk close to Byunghun while talking . Before he can touch his body Byunghun said
"How much ?? and dont touch me  "
"Hahaha this boy is really stubborn . How much u can pay ?? "
the big guy smirk
"Tell me how many that u want before i change my mind " he replied in cold tone
"That boy really dont know how to write "scarry" word huh ?? Let me tell u this. I want a passionately night with that cute boy behind you " with that a shiver run down my spine. my legs feel weak when i saw that guy's prevert eyes. I hold tighter on Byunghun 's hand . I dont know why .
"Coz of ur words just now u wont have anything and u will need to go to hell old man " Byunghun said with cold face
"Aishh~" that big guy wanna punch in Byunghun face again and i 'm about to protect him again but he pulled me back behind his back and two man in black came and hold that guy back .
"Young Master ~ sorry we was late. How are u ?? "
"Hey~Let me go who are u ??  "
that big guy keep yelling
"I'm ok . Take him away with all his friends and let him know who did he punched in the face b4 . After that u know what u need to do right??"
"Yes~ we know . We'll go now"
"Let go of me now u dont know who am i right?? I'm son of Shin Group. My father will kill u all if u do something to me "
that guy yell
"Really?? And u surly dont know who is the one u just punch in his face ?? We will let u know later" the two big man in black said then pull that guy out with all his friends. After they left Byunghun pulled me with him again. He asked the manager who is still frozen  on one of the chair  while walking
"Where is your office ??"
"Nae??"

Byunghun stopped and turn to the manager "i asked u where is your office??  "
"Ah~ on the second floor"
"Where is the key ??"
"Here"
the manager hand it to Byunghun with two hands . I wonder why he is so scarred of Byunghun like that . He took that key and said
"Bring me first air kit there"
"Nae"
that manager replied politely. With that Byunghun pulled me to the second floor. Opens the door and pushed me on the sofa.
"Sit there i'll take care of ur wound" he said
"I'm ok . You are the one who got hurt more and i can do it myself" i said
" just do what i told u to do " he said without look at me. There is knock on the door
"Come in " he said
" here is the first air kit. Do u want anything ?? " the manager said
"Close the club for today . That's all "
"Ok i'll do it now " after this the manager went out . I'm about to run after him to appolozise but Byunghun called me back
"What do u wanna do now ?? "
" i wanna say sorry and take back my job"
"It's not your false so no need to sorry go back to your seat"
"But....."
"No but..."
With that he pushed me in the sofa again and started treat my wound in the conner of my mouth. I knit my brows to endure with the pain . He seem to realeased that and start blowing in there to reduced my pain , with that my heart pouting hard again . "Too close .Pls stop it dont pout that fast Mr.Heart. He will hear it he will hear it" i keep talking to myself.
"All done . Wait here i'll talk u home later since it's late " i open my eyes and he already sat on other sofa.
"Thank you" i saw there are a few wound in his face too so i said
"Let me treat your wound" my face turn red just by say those word. He keep silience. I decided to come closer to him, knees in front of him and start treating his wound . He clenched his teeth coz of the pain . I blowed at it like he did before . He seem ok with this after a while i finished treat all his wound on his face. I realeased there is still some wound on his hand. I'm planning to take his hand to treat that wound too . He seem suprised and pulled his hand back at first but after that he give it to me and said sorry with low tone.  When i touch his hand my heart feel hurt . "Why his hand so cold like that . I havent noticed it b4 but his hand is really cold. Is his heart like that too ?? " i think
"Have u done yet ?? " he asked
"Ah~ yes " i realeased that i still holding his hand and think abt other thing. "I need to stop this feeling as soon as possible after all he is not like me "


Byunghun's POV
When he touched my hand there is an electric run straight to my heart made me pulled my hand away from him . I could see he was hurt coz of this so i let him do it . "But what is it ?? This feeling is something that i dont know ?? My heart is beating fast now and in this close he may hear it so just calm down Mr.Heart . Pls calm down he may hear it" i talk to myself and try to calm down by saying
"Have u done yet ?? " i asked
"Ah~ yes " he got out of his own thought
"I'll take u home . Stand up " i told him . He standed up like i said then start walking behind me. I wanna holding his hand again but my Noona 's words come again "dont trust anyone easily , they will hurt u , they will " .......




*END CHAPTER 7*
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Rinininette #1
I think it's a good fic with a potencial but like you said it at each chapter, English is not your first language and you make many grammar and spelling mistakes ^^' so it's disturbing. And then you write in SMS language so... English is really the main problem, and I know you can improve it like I did :)
Beside that, the story plot is great and there are lots of drama, so we don't really have boring and short passages. Your chapters are long enough, it's a good point. Maybe you should have developed a little more about the life problems about ChangRick, but this is okay, because we have already the beginning of their love life and some parts of Changhyun's pregnancy ^^
So good job for your fic and hope you'll improve!
hanneulbyungchan
#2
Chapter 36: I waited for this last chapter...for so long...love it such a wonderful ending!!!! ^__^
yumisawanga
#3
Chapter 36: aaawwwww this was just so amazing thank you for writing it!!!!!! XD
Songjiin #4
Chapter 36: Don't shift to chuniel.. I do like them but just as brothers relation.. Not like chunjoe that's have special relation(love)
auliya_angel #5
Chapter 36: this story is amazing..
please make a sequel or make a new chunjoe fanfic...
hanneulbyungchan
#6
Chapter 35: wahaah!!!I read your story for two days...please update soon!!!!
hanneulbyungchan
#7
Chapter 8: waaah!!! really love your story...we almost have same mind i think..in terms of writing stories...^__^...love it!!!

I hope Chanhee is a girl!!!!,,,,yet I imagined he is....
Songjiin #8
Chapter 34: update soonnn.... im anticipating the end of the story....its a great story ever..
Galaxy_30 #9
Chapter 34: Gah~Update I want Chunjoe back together. I want Channie to get pregnant again. Who knows he might have 2 boys and a girl~~~. XD Great story btw!
dysch05 #10
Chapter 33: waaa this story will be end..I hope happy ending ^^ it's good story author-nim. I liked it. update soon please..^^