Cheonsa Cafe

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Hey~ i'm back with Chapter 5 ^^ hope u guys like it ^^ now enjoy it >>>>>>>>

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Chanhee'POV

Today is Saturday , the coffee shop is full of customers now. They are couple, friends or family."i used to have this kind of happy too , i used to have a wonderful life with a funny Appa, a Lovely Omma and a cute bro . But it's all gone now. I was left here all alone in this life without any relatives.Omma,Appa give me some more strenght pls " there is a noise bring me back

"Hyung~ Hyung~ i'm here. What will we have for dinner??"
"Ofc rice like everyday"
"I know but at least u will have something new since today is Sat ,Hyung~"
he pout
"Alright~ alright ~ look at you !! I was just kidding we have fish today. I already ate with the others earlier so there is just u dear. Minsoo Hyung will go back to his parents's house today."
"Nae" with that Chanhyun rushed to kitchen in  eat his food their.
Minsoo Hyung's shop is just a small shop called "Cheonsa Cafe ". He openned it coz he like coffee and sweet things but Minsoo Hyung need to work at his family's company too so i'll be here take care of his shop untill he is back at 6pm everyday.even he is back i'll still be here working as waiter till 8:30pm then head to my last part-time job of the day - waiter in a club. Changhyun is walking here everyday to have dinner with me. At first i dont wanna bother Minsoo Hyung since Changhyun can cook by himself but Minsoo Hyung said that it'll save some more money for Changhyun's study so i had to agree after all.
"Hyung~ is there anything i can help ?? I dont have homework today and the shop seem really crowed"Changhyun walk out of the kitchen with a big smile

"Ok ~ just help me take order from table number 6. Ah ~~~ wait~ Changhyun yaa~ how is the boy i brought home this morning?? "

"He is fine now and his bro already picked him up . He seem like a rick boy and he even didnt say thanks you what an impolite person" he said then walk away leave me with my own thought " why i care abt that boy so much ?? He is just a stranger . And i wonder why he keep frowning while sleeping ?? "

Changhyun'POV
After finish dinner i asked to help my Hyung coz he seem really busy now .
"Hyung~ is there anything j can help ?? I dont have homework today and the shop seem really crowed" I walk out of the kitchen and asked him with a big smile
"Ok ~ just help me take order from table number 6 .Ah ~~~ wait~ Changhyun yaa~ how is the boy i brought home this morning?? "He asked
"He is fine now and his bro already picked him up . He seem like a rick boy and he even didnt say thanks you what an impolite person"
After that i rushed to table number 6
"what should i take for u guys?? "
There are two guys . One has big lips with read hair and one has a nice body with black hair. The one with black hair keep looking at me with his eyes and his mouth wide open
"You are the cute boy that go to same school as me ??" I looked at him with question eyes and he start talking again
"Do u remember me ?? I'm the one who talk with u on the phone when i came to ur house to pick up my troublemsome Hyung . Do u remember him the one with orange hair?? " he look at me waiting ....

Jonghyun'POV
After the car stop in front of Byunghun Hyung's house ,he rushed out if my car without saying anything "Can he pls just say thank you ?? Why it's so hard ?? Aishh~~ that Hyung "i mumber. At that time my phone ringing . I pick it up
"Nae Hyung~ "
"YAH~ WHERE ARE YOU ?? WHY ARE YOU SKIPPING SCHOOL ?? "
"Calm down Hyung ~ u should ask ur belove Byunghun Hyung"
"What?? Not again. U re not his personal driver after all "
he teased
"Stop that Hyung. Wait me abit i'll be the so we can go to eat something . I'm so hungry now"
"Ok palli i'm hungry too "
i hung up the phone . I rushed to my school pick Niel Hyung up
"Where should we eat Hyung?? "
" what do u wanna eat ?? Imm so tired of all those foods that we used to eat. Find something new "

"Nae"  i start driving around some street to find where to eat . While driving i tell Niel Hyung abt the thing happened today how funny Byunghun Hyung is when he is wearing Mickey T-shirt and how cute that boy who wear our school's uniform is . Niel Hyung laughed so hard and he start talking after a long term of laughing
" you like that boy?? I mean that cute boy you met today ??"
"I'm not sure i just think he is cute at first and i wanna know more abt him"
"It's easy dear . There are not really much students who can have schoolarship. I'll ask me Omma for u"
"Nae thank you Hyung"
suddently i saw a familar shadow . I mumber to myself "is it him?? "
"Hyung~Hyung~ is it our school's uniform??" I asked Niel Hyung and point to the coffee shop where that boy just went inside
"Where ?? Where?? Yeah~ i think so "
"Hyung~ i think i found him let's eat there ok? "
no need for him to respont i parked my car and pull him out of it. We are now sitting on the table. I saw him walk in here but why he is nowhere to be found.while i still think abt it. There is a voice interput my thought
"what should i take for u guys?? "
In front of me is that cute boy . My eyes and my mouth wide open. Im surly Niel Hyung dead of laughing now. After 1min look at him
"Mr.Choi pls close your mouth" with that Niel Hyung is laughing hard again . i close my mouth and talk
"You are the cute boy that go to same school as me ??" He looked at me with question eyes
"Do u remember me ?? I'm the one who talk with u on the phone when i came to ur house to pick up my troublemsome Hyung . Do u remember him??  the one with orange hair?? " i look at him waiting. He blink blink a few time before smile again
" oh ~so that impolite Hyung 's name is Byunghun huh?? And u are that bro who that Hyung mentioned before. The one who drived a red car?"
"Yup~ it's me ^^ btw we are in the same school. you re working here ?? "
"No i just be here to help my Hyung who is casher now"
he point to a boy who have big-doe eyes, milky skin and pink lips. "Wow~ he look like a girl, i wonder what will Byunghun Hyung think when he saw this boy"  i thought.
"So that boy who is your Hyung carried Byunghun Hyung on his own??" Niel Hyung stop laughing and asked
"Nae~ofc and he also took care of that impolite Hyung too . If my Hyung didnt find out your Hyung he may dead now" at that time i realeased this boy keep calling Byunghun Hyung is Impolite Hyung. I asked
"Why u called Byunghun Hyung is impolite Hyung ?"
"It because he didnt say thank you with the one who saved his life"
"he does it all the time"
Niel Hyung said cut that cute boy off. But that cute boy seem didnt hear what Niet Hyung said and keep talking
"Now pls ordered i need to take other order too " he said with a cutest smile ever on his face ."i think i really like him now " i squeez in my head
"YAH~ CHOI JONGHYUN PLS WIPE YOUR DROP NOW. YOU LOOK LIKE A ERT WHO LIKE TO STOLE YOUNG GIRL'S UNDERWEAR "
"Hyung~ no need to talk that loud all the shop look at us now. It's ashamed  "
"U desevred it "

After this second time we meet i wanna know more abt that cute boy and I forgot to ask his nAme again ...


*END CHAPTER 5*
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I finished it. it'll be double update so i hope u guys like it. Once again i still couldnt make Channie and Byungie meet each other. I promissed next chapter will be just two of them. Pls forgive all my grammar and spelling mistake and pls subscrible , leave comment and upvote. Thanks you for read my fic!!. I love u all my lovely readers ^^ bye~

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Rinininette #1
I think it's a good fic with a potencial but like you said it at each chapter, English is not your first language and you make many grammar and spelling mistakes ^^' so it's disturbing. And then you write in SMS language so... English is really the main problem, and I know you can improve it like I did :)
Beside that, the story plot is great and there are lots of drama, so we don't really have boring and short passages. Your chapters are long enough, it's a good point. Maybe you should have developed a little more about the life problems about ChangRick, but this is okay, because we have already the beginning of their love life and some parts of Changhyun's pregnancy ^^
So good job for your fic and hope you'll improve!
hanneulbyungchan
#2
Chapter 36: I waited for this last chapter...for so long...love it such a wonderful ending!!!! ^__^
yumisawanga
#3
Chapter 36: aaawwwww this was just so amazing thank you for writing it!!!!!! XD
Songjiin #4
Chapter 36: Don't shift to chuniel.. I do like them but just as brothers relation.. Not like chunjoe that's have special relation(love)
auliya_angel #5
Chapter 36: this story is amazing..
please make a sequel or make a new chunjoe fanfic...
hanneulbyungchan
#6
Chapter 35: wahaah!!!I read your story for two days...please update soon!!!!
hanneulbyungchan
#7
Chapter 8: waaah!!! really love your story...we almost have same mind i think..in terms of writing stories...^__^...love it!!!

I hope Chanhee is a girl!!!!,,,,yet I imagined he is....
Songjiin #8
Chapter 34: update soonnn.... im anticipating the end of the story....its a great story ever..
Galaxy_30 #9
Chapter 34: Gah~Update I want Chunjoe back together. I want Channie to get pregnant again. Who knows he might have 2 boys and a girl~~~. XD Great story btw!
dysch05 #10
Chapter 33: waaa this story will be end..I hope happy ending ^^ it's good story author-nim. I liked it. update soon please..^^