Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS

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she thought her father killed her mother. she blame it on her father who are on the situation. she didn't knew what she saw was a mistake and not at the right timing. 

now she changed to her opposite side: 'what happened to the happy-go-lucky Sunmi?' 

not long after that,her father make a hardest decision which is to let her stay/live with his close friend.

by the age of 19, her life been complicated with everything around her. things happened which make her to choose. what would be her decision? will the truth behind of her mother death reveal? or will she get revenge on her father first?

 

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hello everyone! i know its been awhile since i update my story because of my lame excuses which i get alot of busy each day.. im really sorry so for the surprise i may change the whole story.

 

Foreword

 

Yoon Sunmi

2NE1

 

And there will be more characters in this story, so stay tuned guys! ^^

 

 

HEY GUYS! I'M BACK WITH MY 2ND STORY. YEAAAY! THIS STORY WILL BE UPDATE AFTER I FINISH WITH MY FIRST STORY. HERE IS THE LINK FOR MY 1ST STORY ---> http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/578006/saturday-school-changjo-schoollife-teentop-you-btob-ilhoon :D OH YEAH, DON'T FORGET SUBSCRIBE AND COMMENT ON THAT STORY ALSO IN THIS STORY! HOPE YOU GUYS WILL LIKE IT.

DO NOT COPY CAT MY STORY, THANKS!

 

Oh yeah before i forgot! Thanks to Laymontae and also their shop which is Dream & Fantasy Workshop because them, i'm happy they wiling to make the poster for me. I know you are workhard on it and i really satisfied with it. You guys curious about them? Then, go visit at their shop now, http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/684582/1/dreams-fantasy-workshop-graphics-request-posters-fanfics-got7

Also, thanks to ◇ Falling Snow Graphic Shop ◇  for the GREAT, AMAZING,COOL, poster you make for me. its really super gangs-like poster. thankyou for once again. I'm satisfied with it.  Wanna make your story and poster atrractive? so why don't click here ---> http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/756978/falling-snow-graphic-shop-open-graphic-kpop-poster-posterrequest  :D :D ^^. THANKYOU! 

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CREDITS TO -----> YOGI FROM ʕ ᓀ ᴥ ᓂ ʔ K U M A 2.0 FOR THE GREAT POSTER AND BACKGROUND! I LOVED IT! THANKYOU SO MUCH!

 

 

a very special credit to Yuriuchiwa for an amazing poster! thank you so much!! ^-^

 

the poster 

 

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davian #1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian #2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn #7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94 #9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody #10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!
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