chapter 7 (EDIT)

Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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The next morning day, it was supposed to be a school day but apparently Sumi cannot go to school because she still haven't yet conscious from her sleep. She were hurting badly last night but thanks to him because of him she were lying on her bed with some bandages on some parts of her body.

She had her eyes closed in deep slumber. While she having deep painful sleep, Bigbang and 2ne1 are still sleeping in her room. They were so depressed also sad looking at her condition like this.

After a while she stirred in her sleep and let out a slight of whimper. Jiyong the closed one to her who just slept beside her slowly awake at the sudden movement from Sumi.

His eyes fell on her immediately and her eyelids finally fluttered opened. Sumi blinked her eyes to clear her blurry vision.

She then looked around and saw 2ne1, Bigbang still in their sleep suddenly her eyes glanced to her side and stopped when she saw Jiyong's face with worried eyes and she slightly frowned.

"Sumi, are you okay?" Jiyong broke the silence in the room and spoke gently not wanting disturbs the other sleeps.

She nod indicating that she were okay when suddenly a group of seven boys barged into her bedroom and in came her friends, BTS with worried expression. Bigbang and 2ne1 jolted up from their sleep and some even fall off from the couch.

"Who are the intruders?" asked Seungri half asleep. BTS just laughed along the others except Sumi.

"Seriously, have you known knocking a door before coming to the room? Not just barged in something like that, idiots!" Taeyang snorted.

"Please stop! I'm having headache if you guys raised your voice like that." she croaked as she held her head in pain.

Now all the attention went to Sumi and bombard her questions.

"you awake! You okay?"

"why you didn't answer our call?"

"did it hurt that badly?"

"you should called us, you know?!"

"that bastard! He gonna pay for this!"

Sumi had enough of this and getting tired, "Stop!" she yelled causing pain to .

BTS stopped talking and a concern looks on their face. She try to sit up when she fall back down again because her back is still hurt. Sumi let out sighs as Jiyong helped her sit up, "Do you need anything?"

Sumi shook her head, "No. Please don't get worried too much. I'm okay, guys."

BTS, Bigbang and 2ne1 exchanged looks and sigh, "I wonder what will se7en hyung react about this." TOP said as he lowered his head down upset by looking at her state.

"Please don't tell him about this. He has things to take care of." Sumi pleaded.

Jiyong watched her for a few second before looking somewhere else. He is very guilty just by looking at her condition because he is the one responsible for her safety and protect her as her father ordered.

She held Jiyong's hand and he looked up see her smiling at him, "Don't blame yourself, oppa. Things like this always happened." Jiyong smile a little at you.

"Ah~ I think we're gonna take a bath." D

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!