chapter 6 (EDIT)

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Sumi's POV

I looked around my house and see all the maids probably left already. My stomach suddenly growled and I looked down on my stomach, patted it. It seems I'm hungry... again. When I was about to enter my kitchen, someone call my name from behind.

"Sumi, where have you been?"

I turned around and shocked written in my face,"Jiyong oppa, what are you doing here?"

He folded his arms on his chest while glaring at me. "I was waiting for you in the house like 3 hours ago. And guess what? found out that you ditch school again. seriously, whats gotten into you,uh?"

"I'm at BTS's place." I bluntly said completely ignore his questions and walked pass by him since I didn't have any appetite anymore.

"I was worried for you, don't you know that? I was told to taking care of you. What if they kidnap you, huh?" Jiyong angrily said.

"Oppa! I have enough with your old nagging! I know how to take care of myself. I can't just rely on you! I don't need to tell you 24/7 what I'm doing or where I go!"

"Goddamn it, Sumi! Could you please consider it as my advice?"

"Look, I didn't ask you to stay here with me. I'm done!"

Jiyong stared at me for awhile and sighs, "You are such stubborn!"

I smirks, "so I've been told!" with that I stormed off to my room without feeling guilty that I just acted like a brat at him.

Jiyong sighs in frustrated, "why are you behaving like this, Choi Sumi?"

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Am I being rude to him? Aish! I've really got a bad temper. I let out sighs as I blowing my hair with hair dryer.

Ting!

My phone screen lit up when there is a notification coming. I switch off the hair dryer and grabs my phone, unlock it and read at the message that someone send.

Sumi-ah, we're very sorry this time. you can't sleepover at our house tonight because we've got something work to do. maybe some other time, okay? take care of yourself there. we love you XOXOXO.

-Jin Oppa :)

I throw my phone away to my bed and sighs in frustration. i really hates it because this is not the first time they cancelled it.

I heard someone knocked on my door and peeked his head at my room,"What do you want, GD?" I tiredly said with sarcasm in my voice.

He raise his eyebrow and shook his head. he knew whenever I called out his nickname, its mean one thing...I'm not in the mood...

"look, I'm sorry for being such an back there." he nervously said as he rubbed at the back of his head.

Now, I feel guilty when he said that. I looked up at him and smile a little, "nope. I'm the one to say sorry here I didn't mean to say like that. I was just having a rough day, I guess."

GD spread his arms out, "So, can I get my girl for hug?"

I run into his arms without i knowing, I suddenly sobbed in his warmth embrace. He rested his chin on my head and close his eyes while whispering 'everything is going to be alright'.

My hugged become tighten while holding onto his waist, "I miss being me as a kid. a kid that there is nothing to worry about besides your lollipop being stolen. I miss them so much, oppa. I'm such a bad daughter. even i accused my own father killed my mom. tell me oppa, when can I get a normal life? when can I live like an ordinary girl who only worry about her grades or perhaps boyfriend's things?"

His heart sank when he hearing a desperate words coming out from my mouth. What I didn't knew is that he is also hurting seeing I cried such a baby. This is not the first time he see me like this. "Sumi-ah, please stop crying. It hurts me seeing you like this."

I sniffed and lifted my head up to look at him, "I will if you want to go out with me tonight?"

He smiled at the thought of it, "Sure if it makes you happy."

I jumped in happily while Jiyong oppa shook his head in disbelief at my sudden changed acted.

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Sumi's POV

I was so excited knowing that I can finally going out. At first, I felt bad at him for being such a rude and secondly, I thought it will be the best to freshen up my mind for awhile. then, a sudden thought came to me when I think back at his comfort words at me.

it's hurt me seeing you like this.

I sigh and looked at him in wonder, "why you really care for me?"

He seems shocked at my sudden question but hey I wanna know why. "I...i..-"

I cut him off, "is it because of my Dad told you to?"

He laughs nervously, "yeah,..thats right..haha"

Okay, that's weird. I thought and looked outside of the window. It's not awkward feeling but it's a calm yet comfortable atmosphere in the car.

I don't know where he is taking me but I can tell that we're at night market seeing all the food stall around as we drive past by it.

"We're here." he said and unbuckle his seat belt while looking at me tenderly.

"what are you looking at, oppa? Come on!" I break our eye contact and nervously said. if he continues to stare me like that, I don't think I can handle my heart rapidly beating.

As gentlemen he is, he run to my door and open it for me. I gently smiled at him. Gosh, if I was another girl I would probably fall for him because his sweetness drives me crazy. He even smiles sweetly at me that can melt my heart any seconds now. please oppa, don't smile like that.

He held out his arm, "are you ready for our 'date', mi lady?"

I just laughed at his words and linked my arms at around his arm, "yes, I am." We burst into laughs at his own silly acted. but deep inside my heart it's beating crazily fast and nervous at the same time because we've never been closed this so far as I remember.

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GD POV

She finally laughed. I love seeing her this way. If I really was her boyfriend what would it be. Maybe I was the lucky guy in the world but that won't happen right? In my mind, I hope one day she will realized my fe

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!