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Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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Jiyong's POV

I listened intensely at their explanation at what had happened. I can sense that they were feel guilty at us because at the fact they hide it from us about Bom.

"hyung, we're sorry because we don't tell you because we still want to confirm it when Sumi told us something was strange at Bom noona." explained Namjoon.

I just let out a sighed, "next time don't hide it from us. we're family, remember? we're on this together."

I then turned my attention to my side and Sumi who has been quiet all the time didn't talk about it.

"but you guys sure didn't knew who is the new leader?"

They sadly shook their head and I heaved a sighs in surrender.

The time ticking so fast when doctor came out from the emergency room, "how are they, doctor?" I nervously asks.

The doctor broke into a small smile, "we managed to safe Dara-sshi, luckily the stab wasn't so deep but her condition is still weak and not stable due to almost losing of bloods. right now, she is resting in VIP room so i hope you won't make any noise while the patience in needs lots of rest."

All of us breathed out a relief sighs when the doctor continue, "and Bom-sshi.." i can feel that the doctor hesitate to say when all of us had this uneasy feelings and in hoping that they managed to safe noona as well.

"...it was too late to safe her. by the time, you brought her here, she already losing a lots of bloods and the bullet was too deep in her stomach. she was too weak to keep on survive but in the end she died on the process taking out the bullet. we're very sorry, Jiyoung-sshi. we're already tried our best to keep the patient survive unfortunately her time is up. we're very sorry once again." the doctor politely bowed at us and left us behind.

I heard the girls burst into cry and Sumi silently cry with her face hidden onto her palms. I was too speechless to hear the news that she is gone from our life. i was froze on my spot as the boys lowered their head with a mixed feelings. I don't know what should i tell to Se7en hyung after this? it was my job to protect them but i failed as the older in the group.

I went sit beside Sumi and pulled her to hug but she refused to hug him. then, she stand up from jer seat and ran out from here.

I was too shocked to notice anything and yelled out her name, "Sumi!" and ran after her.

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Sumi's POV

I ran out from there because i can't hold it anymore. the more i think about Bom unnie the more i felt guilty about it.

I stopped at the garden which located outside of the hospital. I was too break down and falls down on my knees.

I can't believe that Bom unnie is died. She is the one who are always be there for me. she is always protective towards me and nagging at me if i sometime escaping from school. but she n

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!