chapter 8 (EDIT)

Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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No One POV

"what are you thinking, JR?! are you trying to kill her?! don't you forget that all of this is OUR fault! we using her to take down Bigbang! gosh! you're unbelievable, dude!." His friend named Jackson groaned in frustration.

JR after incident he hangs out with his friends at their place and yes he felt guilty at Sumi for what he done to her. He sighs in defeat and no words coming out from his mouth.

"you do still love her, aren't you?" Jackson suddenly asked him causing the poor guy glared at him.

"it was all in the past! it's got  nothing to do with this!"

JB rolled his eyes, "yeah,sure. keep talking like that, JR!"

"our plan isn't going to work if you continue act like this, JR hyung." Bambam said as matter of facts.

JR ruffled his hair in frustrations. Bambam got a point there and he can't deny that he do still love her. When he seeing her hurting like that he immediately feel regret at what he did to her.

"Oh anyway hyung, did you already heard about Red Dragon?" Youngjae asks.

JR gulp and nervously shook his head, "Why?"

Youngjae crossed his arms over his chest, "They're back and I heard there is a new gang under Red Dragon."

"not just that, I heard rumors they are targeting Sumi."

All of them looked at Youngjae in shock. Youngjae hands up in defense, "I don't know anything."

What they didn't know is JR been hiding from them that he is one of them. so he just pretend that he didn't know anything about it. He had no choice but to join them if he is not they will threat him by making his group doing their dirty work and even bring up Sumi into this. so he feel so frustrated because he didn't want anything happened to his friends also with Sumi.

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Someone's POV

"hyung, what are you thinking about?" a guy with an owl eyes asked at his hyung.

He snapped out his thought and looks at his friend, "Oh nothing. It's just, do you by any chance know someone named Sumi?" as he stared at his computer trying to find out about Sumi background.

"hmm.. I don't know. But it seems familiar to me. wae?"

"can you find out for me? I know you really expert on this."

"wae? wae? It's really rare you know~ and I can see that you already trying to searching information about her." That guy smirks and wiggles his eyebrow.

Chanyeol pushed his face away, "Just do it as I said, DO."

"wooo, someone gone mad~." DO tease.

"Who is mad?" Baekhyun interrupts them making both Chanyeol and DO startled at his presence.

"woah mate! You almost give me a heart attack." DO dramatically say as he pu

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!