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Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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Sumi's POV (Monday morning)

In the next morning, i woke up with sore at the back of my body. I yawned and stretched my arms out.

Yesterday was really tiring and i come home late because someone was mess our hideout. I still haven't found who the hell broke into our hideout and what do they want. Jiyong was yelling at me because of my stupid acted last night.  I shrugged at the thought of it and getting ready for school.

"Good morning everyone~" As soon as i went downstairs, I greeted them with a smile on my face. They smile and greeted back. 

"Here is your breakfast, Sumi-sshi." said one of my favorite maid, Yuna.

I thanked her and started to eat my breakfast. Well, my breakfast its just simple with cheese bread and warm milk. Yeap, thats was i like but sometimes they make me pancake. Ooo~ i miss what mommy cooked for me. I slightly pouts at the thought of my mother making Yuna chuckled at my cuteness. Hey, even though i'm gangster i can acted childish for the one who closed to me. 

"Yuna-sshi, is there any I can do to help with your grocery after school? If there, i can help you buy with it." I winks.

Yuna shook her head, "Anyi. its okay. this is our work, Sumi-sshi."

I looked at her, "Are you sure?"

She nods her head in confident, "Yeap."

I shrugs, "Okay then." Then i stood up and smiled at them, "Thank you for making me this breakfast. i gotta go now. Bye~" i waved and thanked them for such sweet breakfast. They laughed at my awkward acted.

As soon as i stepped outside, i was surprise to see Jiyong there leaning against on the wall. When he heard someone was out, he tilted his head to my side. "Oppa, what are you doing here?" i asked.

He pushed  himself from the wall and approached at me, "Of course to send you to school. what else? haha." he laughed from nervous.

I raised my eyebrows at him, "well, i can go by myself?"

He ruffled my hairs, "Your father asked me to taking care of you by sending you to school, picked you up and all."

I pouts, "You know i'm grown up girl not a kids anymore." I whines.

He smiled, "For him and us you are still kids."

I stuck my tongue out to him, "bleh~" with that i stomped my feet on the way to his car and get in.

He shook his head at my childish acts.

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As our way to school, Jiyong asks me, "Sumi-ah, i'm sorry for my behavior yesterday."

I glanced at him and wonder, "for what?"

Jiyong took a quick glance at me then let out a sigh, "yesterday for yelling at you without any reason, remember?"

I mouthed 'O' shaped then remember about yesterday.

Flashback~

"WHO THE HELL BROKE INTO OUR HIDEOUT, UNNIES? I SWEAR IF I KNEW THEM, THEN THEY'RE MESSING THE WRONG PERSON!" I angrily yelled. I was so worried and mad at the same time because I just got info from them when these mess happened. And my temper raising up when I saw some of them were in bruised. 

"Sumi-ah, will you shut up and help us here?" said CL as she getting annoyed at my outburst.

I shook my head and glared at them, "You guys are injured. Don't tell me its from that Dragon gangs!"

"You don't know anything about them. So just keep your mouth shut!" hissed Dara

I smirk and call one of my Dad's men, "Help me to find who is messing with 2ne1."

And then i hung up the call and went out from the hideout. "!" CL cursed and kicked the can in angry.

Minzy called Jiyong to tell what happened.

"Miss, its a new group called BAP." said one of my Dad's men. I smirked and nodded my head when he told me where to find them.

"You guys are so dead! You don't know who you are messing with." I clenched my hand and pulled out my mask.

I arrived at the club and laughed sarcastic, "seriously? what kind of gangs is that come at this club? Angel's club eh?"

When i went inside, a musics blast can be heard and the girls dancing and grinding to the boys. I looked at them in disgust and i scanned around the room to find my target. I smirked when I found them, "Well, hello boys~" I dangerously said and headed at their spot.

They looked confused at me and standing up in alert, "who are you?" the guy said with his deep voice. woaw! he's voice is y. aish! i shook the thought away and asked them to follow me. They were at first hesitates to follow me but they curiously wants to know what is going so no choice they decided to follow me then.

Once we were at the back of the club, I turned around and throw a sudden punch at whoever are close to mine. Unluckily, a guy with deep voice were the one and he fall on the ground. He looked bewildered at me

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!