chapter 14 [edit]

Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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Someone's POV

A guy walking into Yoon Company holding a file of documents by his hands along with a two bodyguard walk side by side of him.

People working in there bowed in respect at him as he nodded in replied.

As he arrived at his destination and took a deep breath seeing a big door infront of him with a sign 'Big Boss' attached on the door.

"you two stay here." he command at his bodyguard while they just nodded their head.

He knocked the door third time before someone answered saying, "come in." he went inside the room and bowed at his boss.

"Mr Yoo, i'm here." he said as Mr Yoo lifted up his head from doing his work and broke into a smile when the boss see his trust assistant, Tablo.

"ah, Tablo you came. i just thought of you before you coming here. so, any news?"

Tablo nodded his head and handed out the document at his boss.

The boss went through it and smile in satisfied at his works. "excellent!"

Tablo just giving him a small smile, "if its not with the help from Mr Choi."

"Sir, there is something i want to share with you." Tablo slowly said as he get an attention from his boss.

Mr Yoo lean forward with his hand clasped together, "What is it?"

"It's about her friends sir, do you perhaps still remember them?" His assistant carefully said and try to see what the reaction that his boss give.

Mr Yoo frowned upon at his words, "what about it?"

Tablo was hesitate before saying, "there is a big fight between them. and not just that she lost one of her closed which happened to be a betrayer."

Mr Yoo widened his eyes, "what?! how did that happened?!"

"A week ago sir, there is a fight with Red Dragon. i'm afraid they are targeting your daughter sir." His assistant bluntly said.

He slammed his hand on table causing Tablo startled at his boss action.

"Red Dragon is back? this can't be good. do they know who she is?"

"no sir. they only knew that she is the only daughter of Mr Choi."

He looked at Tablo with a sad eyes, "Tablo, I don't want anything happened at my daughter."

Tablo looked at his boss who are seems stressed about it. "i'm sure she will be fine sir. remember that you hiring someone to taking a good care of her."

He remembered about that and will do everything to protect his daughter.

"is that what you want to share with me?"

Tablo nodded as his boss let out a sigh, "okay, you can go now, Tablo."

He didn't say any words when he just nodded, bowed at his boss and left the room.

When Tablo out of his sight, Mr Yoo slumped on his seat tiredness, "I can't protect my own daughter now. she only see me as a murderer who killed his own wife." he close his eyes as the past still fresh on his mind.

~Flashback 7 years ago~

​​​​​​Its 12 o'clock in the midnight. Suddenly there is a crash sound in the living room causing a woman awake from her sleep. She opened her eyes and look around. She saw her husband sleeping peacefully beside her.

"Who would that might be?" She mutter. She got up and put on her cardigan. She quietly opened their door afraid that she might wake up her husband.

She then walking to their daughter's room to make sure she i

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!