chapter 11 (EDIT)

Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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Author's POV

When the school ended, you wearily trudged out to the front door when a voice stopping you. "Sumi-sshi!"

You cursed in your mind and turned around, "What?" You snapped.

Youngjae raise up his hand in defeat, "Chill! I was just curious why you always stormed off like that. Are you in hurry?"

You crossed your arms over your chest, "Yes, I am. If you don't have anything to say, I'll go."

Youngjae grab your wrist, "I'm sorry what I've just said at cafeteria."

You let go from his grip and glare, "i don't even know you." With last glare, you stormed off.

Wait a minute...what am I doing? He frustrated his hair and looked at your way. Somewhat he feels something different from you like you remind of her sister. Youngjae let out sighs and went to his friends that waiting for him.

At the same time, Jiyong has already there waiting for you. You went inside with your grumpy face, "What's wrong with the face?"

"nothing, just drive."

He worriedly glances at your way and drove off. The journey was kind uncomfortable for Jiyong. He cleared his throat to get your attention, "How was school today?"

You looked up at him, "fine, I guess." you mumbled.

Jiyong raised his eyebrow, "and why is that?"

"I don't know. I felt really annoyed by the new guy at my class. He really pissed me off." you scoff.

"What do you mean he pissed you off? You know what; it's the first time someone making you pissed." He chuckles.

You pouts, "Oppa~"

"What? Its true. It's the first time you complained about someone making you pissed." He laughed.

You also laugh along with him, "Oppa?" you suddenly called out at him.

"Yeah?"

"I'm sorry for making you worried over me again. I know I'm being selfish not thinking others feeling. i'm so sorry~" you sincerely said.

He stopped the car, "Its okay. I'm sorry for my attitude this morning. I know I was mean to you. I'm just too worried for you and i don't want you to get hurt again."

You side hug him, "Thank you oppa. You always be there for me. You always care for me. Thank you."

He smile and patted your back, "Okay, we're here."

You pulled yourself from the hug and went outside to your house. Jiyong sighs, "If you know how I feel for you, will you accept it?" He mutters and he looked at your figure went inside the house.

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Its dinner time and yet you still haven't finished your homework. Jiyong wonder why aren't you coming downstairs. He went to your room and poked his head in, "Sumi-ah, dinner is ready."

You looked up from your work and shook your head, "I'm not hungry, oppa. You can eat first. I'm still finished my homework that due tomorrow."

Jiyong put his hand at his hip, "But still you need to refill your energy so that you can easily work it."

"Its okay, oppa. I'm okay. Just put on the refrigerator and if I'm hungry I will heat it on microwave." You pushed Jiyong out from your room.

Before he protest, you already closed your door and lock. Jiyong sighs, "I will leave it some for you and after dinner I maybe not around because something was up."

"Arraseo. Don't come home late." You yelled.

With that, Jiyong went to eat his dinner. You let out sigh of relief, "Thank goodness. He was worst than my mom nagging."

You continued your homework when your phone buzzed on your desk. You groans the fact that someone disturbing you. You read the text and widened your eyes.

we've got a problem. come to our hideout now!

-Cl unnie-

You frowns in confusion, "what is it this time? i still haven't finish up my homework!" You sighed in frustrated and call Jiyong and at the third ringing he picked up.

"Sumi, what's wrong? Is everything okay?"

"I'm going ou

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!