chapter 18

Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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GD's POV

I lazily pressed the remote control while waiting for Sumi get back home.

Se7en hyung had to go again at his in-laws and telling me to take care of Sumi while he's gone and watch over the gangs for him.

I was not happy about it when he giving me a task to take care of this business gangs.

I let out a yawned and stretched my arms out. I looked at my watch and it been an hour since her school ended.

I frowned, "where is she?" I took my phone and dial her number.

After a few rings, she picked up the call with a heavy panted, "Sumi where are-"

"oppa~"

She sounded so weak on the call and panting heavily under her breath. My instinct tells me something wasn't right, "Sumi, hello.. can you hear me?"

"oppa~ help me.." just like that the line was cut off like someone snatched her phone away from her.

wait a minute... I stood up abruptly when it finally hits me. She sounded desperate for help and.. oh my god. my heart sinks when I think that I don't want it to happen. She is in danger.

I quickly dial Seungri's number and he answered it almost immediately. "hyung, what's up?"

"Seungri! Sumi... she is in danger.. she called me just now.. she needed my help.." my voice cracked when I said that.

Seungri gasped over the phone can be heard and heard muffling voices in the background, "hyung... I will try my best to locate her.. just stay calm Hyung..call 2ne1 and Bangtan.." with that he hangs up the call and I not wasting any time, I went out from the house not forgetting to grab my key and jacket.

I hopped on my motorcycle before dialing Namjoon's number and CL's at the same time.

"Hyung/oppa... what's wrong?"

Suddenly, my aura become eerie and cold, "Sumi is missing.." that's all I managed to say.

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Sumi's POV

"I get it that you know how to dance, lol," I said in sarcasm at Minzy who was dancing in the middle of the road.

She doing moonwalk heading towards me, "I bet you cannot do this."

Then, she makes a body wave in ily as I was just shaking my head at her childish act. She suddenly stopped makes me wondering why she becomes tensed, "Minzy, what's wrong?"

"I think I saw someone.." she coldly said and scanned the area around. I looked ahead of me saw nothing but a dim light from the lamp post.

"yah, don't say anything stupid." I stuttered because there is one thing I fear the most... ghost!

We took a long way to my home because I don't feel like to come home early and Minzy gladly bringing me to stroll around the neighborhood and even pit-stop at ice cream store because I was craving of ice cream.

She looked at me then smirk, "don't tell me you scare of a ghost?"

I clear my throat to ease the awkwardness and confidently held my chin up, "tsk, ghost? I wasn't..-"

She makes a sudden appeared in front of my face with saying 'boo' causing me to jump in surprise, "you piece of ! why are you so mean?" I cursed at her and she laughed so hard because I was trying to act tough when I'm denying the fact that I was scared to death about a ghost.

Then, I heard someone chuckles ahead of us and Minzy stopped laughing and looked in front of us.

"a tough yet genius is scared of a ghost... I didn't know you were scared of a ghost, Sumi-shhi.."

I squint my eyes to look at the person since I can't see the person properly because of the darkness even though the light is dim.

"who's there?" Minzy said with a

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!