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Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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 Bang!

It's the sound of the gun keeps me awakened. I went downstairs while half asleep. I am curious why there is a gun fire?

When i reached downstairs, i straight to go to the kitchen when i spotted there's no one in the living room. 'What is that sound?'

I rubbed my eyes and stop walking when i saw there's a shadow of a familiar figure infront of me. I didn't know what it was but i managed to say..

"Dad? What is that noise?"

I turn on the light on when it's hard for me to see him. I'm just scared if there's anything happen there.

Just as the light are on, i saw my father on the floor with blood could be seen on his face. He panted hard and i could hear his breathe since the atmosphere are quite. I look shocked at the sight of him.

I saw he held a gun on his left hand.

I look frightened but managed to walk slowly towards him even though it felt heavy to do so. When i reached at the back of the table, i saw him.. and the bloody sight of my mother's body right infront of us. I gasped.

I refused to help my father by distancing myself with him. "Dad, what did you do?"

He kept silence. His face wrinkled as if he held in his pain. He kept his arms on his right waist. I didn't care about it.

"Did you kill mom?"

When that sentence said, he turn to me and shook his head. He try to stood up straight but failed. He fall to his knees. "Sunmi, it is not like what you think it looks like"

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!