chapter 9 (EDIT)

Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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Sumi's POV

It's been a week i didn't go to school. And i have big reason for it. The fact about me didn't go to school is i haven't fully recovered yet. Well, my back is still hurt thou. And i don't want to encounter with many make up gossip.

I sat upright on my bed with tired and exhausted feelings also in deep thought about what BTS has told me before about the intruder because it doesn't make sense and they told me to keep it a secret because they want it to know until where the intruder planning when suddenly, "Sumi-ah~" Dara's head peeked in my room.

I snapped out from my thought and smile softly at her, "unnie, what are you doing here?"

"of course I stop by here to visit you. why? I can't visit you?" she raised her eyebrow at me.

I laughed sarcastically, "No, you can't!" i give her a serious looks on my face.

"What? YAH!" she looked at me in disbelief.

I blinked at her and laughs, "aigoo~ unnie why are you so funny~"

She punch my arm as a joke, "you so meanie! you know that? Oh! How is your feeling now?"

I shrug, "I'm okay and no worries. Jiyong oppa have been treated me so well." I make V sign at her.

She wiggle her eyebrows at me, "Oooo~ really?"

I pushed her face away from me, "So what?"

"no feelings at him? at all?" she asked while eyeing me up and down in suspicious.

I frowned, "What? Jiyong oppa and me? No way. I only looked him as my brother!"

Little did I and Dara unni know, Jiyong was actually headed to my room for check up my condition but halted on his track when he heard everything what I've just said. This makes his heart dropped when I was saying that me and him just like brother sister.

With that he silently walked away from my room with heavy feeling not wanting to disturb me and Dara. "She doesn't have the same feeling as me. She just looked at me like a brother." He clutched his chest and tears fall down on his cheek. "Why is it hurt so badly?"

She frowned at me, "aren't you too picky, huh? GD is handsome, cute, and quite gentlemen too. What people like you always say came in one package?"

"I know but I don't know about my feelings towards him, unnie. You can say that I'm a bit picky about this. HAHA!" I sarcastic said while rolling my eyes and let out a sigh. i myself also don't know if I like him or not.

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After Dara unnie went home, I was left alone in my room. I frown, where is Jiyong oppa? I'm hungry. I sigh and thinking about what Dara unnie said awhile ago.

"You don't like him?" This word keeps lingering in my mind. Am I like him? Heol! It's not possible right? Wait! What if he likes me? Eyy~ he's not that stupid.

I shook that thought away and didn't realize that Jiyong oppa was in the room, "Sumi-ah, are you okay?"

I looked up and saw Jiyong oppa asked me with worried face, "I...I'm okay. It's just I...I'm boring here by myself." I stutter as I said it.

What the heck? am I just nervous infront of him? I should be asked that if hes okay or not. I thought to myself. He looked at me for awhile

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!