chapter 22

Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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Sumi's POV

"Let me go, you ugly old man!" I was trying to get free from his grip as I moving and kicking around that they need two men to hold me down.

Moreover, I cannot see where we are heading. They blindfolded me as we arrived at the destination.

"When I get free from here, I' ma beat your ugly so hard until you can't sit down!"

"will you shut up?" The next thing I know they punched me on the belly before harshly pushed me on the floor.

I winced in pain and my head become dizzy at the impact. "Let me go!" I shouted but the men from before forcefully grabbed my hairs, "we won't~" he sarcastically said and harshly pushed my head.

I gritted my teeth in furious, "at least untie the cloth on my eyes, you !" I hear their footsteps are slowly getting faded not caring at my words.

I lay down on the ground and curled up into a ball. To be honest, fear slowly crept into me. Alone in the dark and cannot see anything is always my fear and no one there is going to save me.

I cried and prayed to hope that everything is just a nightmare. a very very bad dream.

But then I hear footsteps getting closer to where I was. I slowly sit up and try to be alert if this person is a threat or not.

"My, my, I didn't think that we got you first, Sumi."

I know this girly voice somewhere but why I can't think of where I heard it.

I can sense that this person bending down and harshly hold my chin like I was facing her.

"I've got a surprise for you." She dangerously said as she unties the blindfolded and opens my eyes before blinking to clear out my sights.

Once my vision becomes clear, I looked in front of me which caught me shocked. A tab showing my friends, BTS were being captive and they looked so badly injured.

"Guys!" I yelled at the tab but the men quickly hold me down before I make a move.

"What did you do to them?!" I furiously asked to whoever is the boss around here.

But when the person showed her face, it shook me. I remember her now! She was JR's ex-girlfriend, Jiyeon.

"What the did you want?!"

She laughed a little but stopped when her eyes throw a glare at me, "Revenged! just like how your family do to my family!"

I frowned, "what are you talking about? I don't know anything about your family!"

She slapped across my cheek, "Liar!"

I can taste blood on my lips and scoffs, "If so, then you are not so important in my family then?"

She wanted to slap me again but halt herself. She gave me a fake smile, "Did you forget about Red Dragon?"

That caught my attention. I narrowed my eyes at her, "How did you know about it?"

She bends down to my level and tilted her head, "Aww Sumi~, I'm the new leader of the Red Dragon."

My eyes went wide in surprise, "No way!" It finally hit me in realization. Everything about my friend, my parents, my hideout.. she knew! she knew about me. She used to be my friend before.

"It was you!"

I try to stand up but the guy holds me down so hard. I hissed in pain and looking straight into her eyes with full of hatred.

"What do you want from me?"

She scoffed and looked me in the eyes, "I want you to join me."

I spit out my saliva at her, " off!" She trying to control her anger before punched me on the face. "You will? Or your little friend over there would suffer?"

I hear their screaming in pain and when I looked at the tab, her men were making a scar onto their skin.

"Jiyeon! You're crazy! Let them go!"

"Why should I? Everyone that I took them in end up betraying me especially JR. God, I thought he loved me but no! he still loves you!"

Then, she brushed my hair away from my face as I grunted at it. "But GD is such a good looking guy. Maybe I should date with him, yeah?"

I narrowed my eyes at her, "Don't you ever think about it!" She laughed and pulled my hair, "Oh I will and you just watch! After that, I can kill them slowly one by one including your mother and your father!"

No! She will not lay a hand on my

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!