chapter 5 (EDIT)

Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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"YOU?!" they said at the same time.

She cross her arms and smirk, "So why is the police chasing after you,huh?"

Chanyeol just glared at her. "Do you think my face look like a threat to you?"

She shrugs, "yeah. except you look creepy on me."

He looked at her in disbelief, "yah! me being creepy? what the hell? that police just chasing after me because...because.." ! i couldn't let my identity to be known for awhile. He nervously thought.

Sumi leaned forward since his voice slowly faded, "because.."

"Because i beat someone.." he mutter. *now, what have you done, Chanyeol? Thats lame excuses ever you're given.*

Sumi narrowed her eyes and shook her heads, "boys these day...always show off."

"am not." then he sighs and mumble, "I've got to go."

She looked at him in confusion, "where to?"

He raised his eyebrow, "To my friend's house" then she can see him smirking towards at her "unless you want to go to my house with me... OUCH! yah!"

She hit him at the head. Seriously, these guy is seriously ert one. Remind me to stay away from him. 

"Did you always hit people on their head? or your habit?" he said while rubbed at the spot. 

She shrugs, and finish her last food. He scanned Sumi up and down and this is make her uncomfortable in her seat. She knocked his head again. "YAH!" he yelled. 

"Don't YAH at me! Why are you looking at me up and down, HUH? ert!" She annoyingly said as she pointed her chopsticks at him.

"Damn! I'm not looking at you because you are hot. I'm just wondering, shouldn't you be at school because I just realized that you are still wearing school uniform or did you ditch the school?" Gosh. this guy asking me so many questions, Sumi frustrated thought.

"Yeah, so what?" she glare at him and he glare at Sumi back. She flinch and curse at him silently. "So, what are your relationship with JR? How do you know him?"

She stopped eating and looked at him with unreadable expression. 

"Its none of your business!" She hissed at him. 

"are you involve in a gang too?" he asked while suspicious eyeing her.

Sumi quickly shook her head, "No..no! I'm not. Its just me and him have a past. thats all! No more questions!"

He was about to open his mouth but Sumi interrupts him, "I'm should go. i can't out here for too long. if someone see me from my school, i'll be dead.." she lied and stood up from her seat.

He shrugs, "I walk you home."

"no thanks!" with that she quickly walk away from him. I can't let him to send me home. Who knew what he is up to. 

He just looked at Sumi figure until it slowly faded. is she avoiding me? he thought. 

He forgot to introduce himself at her. But he doesn't know why her appearance somewhat familiar to him especially those eyes. He swear he have seen somewhere but he can't think when and where.

*This girl know how to make a boy won't stop thinking about her* he thought and shook his head in disapprove. 

But then he realized that this is what he needed, "why must i'm doing this job?" he sighs. He really tiring...tiring acted like nothing happened. All of gangs are in a mess especially when there is a rumor about Red Dragon comeback.

He let out frustrated sighs and a light bulb popped in his mind. 

"I knew where she studying at just by looking at her uniform. Should I just go to there? But I'm old to study again. Ah! Nevermind! This is for the best!" He suddenly call someone. "Hello? Hyung. Can you do me a favor?"

"Yeah, I want to go at YG Academy School. Ah~ just wanted to go there and checked if i've got any information about them. yeah, thanks!" Now, he hang up the call and let out a heavy sighed.

I hope this will be the last job that I'm working it out.

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After coincidentally meeting with Chanyeol, Sumi went to one of her friend's house. Oh how much she misses them so much but there is also why she coming here in the first place. she needed their help.

She rang the doorbell and a door opened by a person with a sleepy face on him,"Hey Sumi. Its been a long time, what's up?" 

Sumi fist bumped with him, "nothing much, Suga." she went inside the house when Suga lazily

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!