chapter 19

Revenged! [Re-Edit] HIATUS
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Sumi's POV

I slowly opened my eyes as I heard someone in an argument, a very familiar voice yelling actually.

I squint my eyes examined around the room as my vision slowly turning into clear sight. I was laying on the comfortable big yet comfy couch. Where am I? I confusedly thought to myself as a pained strike at the back of my head. I winced at the impact and shaking my head to ease the dizziness.

I got up and walked to where I heard the argument going on. While holding at the back of my head, I opened the door and to my surprise, it wasn't locked.

Strange.

As I opened the door, there stood two guys in front of the door. My eyes widened in shocked seeing them together here and had arguing over something.

I gasped and they paused when they heard my voice. They looked at me with both eyes in shock seeing me standing here with the same feelings; surprise, shock, confuse.

"What the hell?" That was the first thing came out from my mouth.

"We can explain!" Both of them said at the same time.

I still confused as ever because I thought JR kidnapped me for no reason but turn out wasn't my expectation.

"care to explain?" I frowned when JR let out a sigh, "Sumi, it was part of my plan. And I asked Chanyeol hyung for help to keep you hidden for a while.

I narrowed my eyes at them, "but I thought you two not knowing each other?"

JR avoid my eyes before saying, "I can't tell you that right now."

Chanyeol crossed his arm over his chest and his expression telling me he was pissed over something. "pfft. I didn't know he was asking my help despite he's my cousin."

My mouth dropped when Chanyeol said that they were a cousin. I quickly looked at Chanyeol in confusion, "but what happened back there on our first encounter? you two seems didn't know each other."

Chanyeol and JR burst into laughter, "Sumi, you so naive. Of course, we acted didn't know each other because we're rival in a gangster world."

I stared at them as if I'm having a nightmare. I pinched my cheek and I yelped in pain, it wasn't a nightmare!

Then, I realized something. "so what is your intention by doing this, uh? I'm a pretty sure your man that with you just now was Red Dragon peeps."

I looked at JR who slowly fake yawned, "It's getting late. I need to go first. I've got some business to do." He then quickly walked away from us which leaving Chanyeol left dumbfounded at JR action.

"Dude, you good at explaining things. So help me and explain to her. Thanks!" JR yelled.

"Stupid bastard!" I heard Chanyeol cursed under his breath like I'm not hearing him.

He then looked at me with a forced smile on his face, "I guess we should get you drinks first, shall we?"

I frowned at his unusual behavior. What's up with him? This morning he was annoying followed me everywhere like a lost puppy but right now he seems different. I wonder if he was acting only to get my attention. but why?

Then, I followed him to the downstairs with confusing feelings. I let out a sigh because I know they will probably worried about my safety.

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davian
#1
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
davian
#2
Chapter 41: Oh no!!!
Don't say you want to delete or save it's has draft, please dont do this, it will be heartbreaking
aznperson #3
Chapter 36: Please continue!!
Heymama #4
Chapter 36: Plss continue..tqqq
Heymama #5
Hi Authornim...any upcoming update?
Heymama #6
Chapter 33: Any updates?
samsamphorn
#7
Chapter 31: Please update soon.....
kiyomi_xoxo #8
Chapter 19: i like it because of the plot and the ideas but can you put in some intense fights and yelling or maybe some romance between the oc and jiyong and maybe have it behind her appas back and i want her to have some kind of tattoo that jiyong sees .
MAYBE
No ?? YES??
minxdahye94
#9
Chapter 10: Ok, here is my comment... I like this story plot but, the plot was very easy to guess and also a bit lack in suspense... But, it's ok... Try to make the story more interesting and more suspense... There is a bit suspense but, it's not enough for readers to be interested and hook at your story... About the introduction with BAP... You just said that BAP break into their hideout place?? Shouldn't they be arguing instead of friendly greetings them... They're gangsters not an Idol... There's no need for you to introduce them so friendly... There's no need for "anneonghasaeyou we are BAP imnida", "anneonghasaeyo, we are 2NE1 imnida"... Just straight to the point... And you left that New gang chapter hanging... There supposed to be arguing and then ask why they break and messing with their place and also why they're messing with them... And stuff like that... Just do anything to make it interesting... Gosh, the Minhyun scene also, how can I say this... Now, it's not suspens and thrilling anymore when you've reveal the hiding enemy... The letter not supposed to be found so easily... It supposed to be start from suspicion, and then investigate and then they finally know who's the hidden enemy... What kind of hiding enemy or what kind of villain will expose themselved and leave a proof of his evil intention... Only a stupid or clumsy villain do that... Here's a tip for you... Don't give answer easily to your readers... Be naughty but still give a few hints for them to solvr the puzzle you leave in their head... If you give answer so easily than, this story won't be interesting... Keep up a good writing and work... I saw that you've improved a little bit... You stick to your plot and story and also the story is also convincing enough to the readers... So far, there's only a few mistakes and I've tell you what it is above... So, if you want any help from me for this story, I'll help if I can and also if I'm not so busy... xoxoxo
Sparkle_Melody
#10
Chapter 9: Are you going to update author-nim ? Please oh please contineu !!! I love it SO MUCH !!