Scared of the Ocean

Description

Minho had an irrational fear of the ocean that he could only thank his parents for. His whole life they had warned him about the terrors that lurked deep within the ocean's waters. Never once had it crossed Minho's mind that within the ocean's dark, deceptive depths lay undeniable beauty and love.

Taemin was always a good boy. He listened to everything his parents told him and never disobeyed. He had everything he could ever want or need in the safety of his own home. He had constantly been warned of the land demons. He knew that they loved to kidnap innocent mermaids and torture them.

It only took one horrible event to bring the two terror stricken boys together in what could possibly be the strangest love story ever told.

Foreword

We're back! It didn't take us too long to get this story up! Truth be told, this is probably the story that I've looked forward to writing the most! I've never written a fantasy story before so this is something new for me. I have a lot of plans for this story and I'm hoping that you guys will enjoy the story! Don't forget to comment, subscribe and upvote the story if you like it!

Note: If you haven't read any of our stories before: My lovely editor minion, Bre, likes to write her own commentary in my author's notes. Anything written in blue is all Bre.

 

We would like to give DeepBluePanda a big thank you for the AMAZING pictures. She is the bestest!!!

 

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4/17 (Bre): Our prayers are with S. Korea and the victims and their families.

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NeverForgotten1302
#1
Chapter 22: Okay I couldn't express this last chapter bcuz it wouldn't let me comment at first but I don't ship HUNHAN I don't know why I meet liked them together. I mean I would read them if it involved other OTPs like Chanbaek and taoris but ugh I had to voice opinion it's not about you guys bcuz this story is AMAZING it's just when autors add EXO OTP I just secretly hope for Taohun or Xiuhan. So yeah
SHINexo_
#2
Chapter 39: I'm so confused reading this. There was just so much missing.. Also it seemed kinda lazy, like you didn't plan the story at all and just made the rules up as you went along not caring about what had already happened. It would build up and then lead to nothing.. Like when Minho asked for directions from the clam and it left the chapter at a cliff hanger (like he turned around and saw something) but then nothing happened.. Also, there was a whole scene about the lost prince of the dead king or something and that seemed like it would go somewhere with Minho even though he was supposed to be the son of a woman who owned a bakery? But nada.. Pointless really.. And Onew had the bracelet, but then suddenly Minho had it? And it just happened to split at the exact moment it needed to rather that when it probably should have if it worked (Like when he first saw Minho again).. And the Mermaids happen to have all these convenient magical things that kept popping up, but it seems like you only wrote most because of laziness to write an explanation instead. Like convenient telepathy, magical stretching bodies for , magical appearing legs for etc :/ Also, his parent knew he was a mermaid, but he never bothered asking them why they didn't say? And then he just never went home after being married.. I just think there was too many plot holes in this :/
lordloss #3
Chapter 11: Great story ♥
kara224 #4
Chapter 40: I loved your story and looked forward to every update. Normally i dont look mermiad stories but yours was just too good. I loved onew s character too it was like he was a matchmaker or something. Thank u for writing this :) the ending was perfect.
Swarna
#5
Chapter 38: That was. . . .amazing. You made awesome choice on 2min's children. Sulli and jongin really looks like tae :-D. I like how you ended it. I'll miss it though. I love this story and no need to mention I love you for writing such stories ;-). Will be Waiting for the next story. :-)
petrinananana #6
Chapter 38: I've been crazy busy so i haven't been commenting but this story is so BLOOOODYYYY AWESOOOMMMMEEEE I LOVE THE EENDDDIINNNNGGG! hahha i love the fact that Sully and Jongin turn out to be 2min's children in the end!!!!! it's so cuuuuteeeee aaaahhhhhh hahhahaha and I really like the story that you guys recommended (Fairy and the Frog) it's exactly the sort of fluffy genre i like reading hehehehe i do like them fantasy feels too TEEHEE (I hope jonghyun dog gets zapped with magic and turns into a human :D) thank you authorniiimmmm and editorniiimmmm :') it's sad to see this story end but maaannnn it was good!
Touchstone
#7
Chapter 38: Wow! JUST WOW! What else could I say? You even made a happy ending,just how i'd like to see it! WOW!
FlamingMe
#8
Chapter 38: Nawww... It's so sad that this story ended already. Dude the ending was soooooooo cute kk >< glad that they got married and having such a cute child omg my feels thank you for the great story tho <3
bluemoonluvkpop0596
#9
Chapter 38: Hahah awww a nice happy ending for 2min ^^ it was nice see how their relationship developed.
Thanks for this story, i enjoyed reading it very much :D