Yuna Inspired: Our Virtual Family [Luhan Version]

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“A letter?”  Hana accepted the letter that had been crumpled and stepped on by a frantic Luhan.  “I can read it?” 

He nodded. 

When she opened it, she focused on making sure she was reading it correctly because of the wrinkles.

To Luhan:

You might not remember me…but, I remember you-us. Very clearly…as if what we had had in the past had just happened yesterday. This took me a lot of courage to do…to write…and, to confess. As you can see…this child…is yours.

Hana gasped and immediately glared at her friend.  “You knocked up a girl!” 

Luhan immediately pushed her into a wall and covered .  Luckily, it seemed no one saw or heard. 

She angrily moved his hands away.  “I thought you were a jerk…” 

He looked at her with an attitude.

“And I am correct.” 

Luhan sighed and crouched down.  “Stop with the teasing.”  He ruffled his hair.  “It can’t be my kid.”

Hana pulled him up with disgust.  “How can you say that!  You must take responsibility for your own actions!”

Luhan pulled back in anger.  “But it’s really not my kid!”  He shouted. 

The two are in silence. 

After calming down, he said, “Because…I’m still a .”

PLEASE READ BELOW!

Oct. 6, 2017: This was finished on August 9, 2017, however, it went into draft status for editing around October. Initially, I had planned on fixing everything—grammar, sentence structure, word-count, etc.­—but I decided NOT to do so because I want to keep my stories the same way that it is for memory and as an example of my writing growth (though, I’m still as bad as ever…I apologize).

Therefore, please expect the following:

Grammar mistakes, back and forth use of past and present tense, and transposition of letters.

So, if you want to know what the change is, it is putting a few chapters in one to lengthen the word-count (I prefer 7k-10k). Because of that, the word-count will fall under that range. I hope you do not mind the long read...

I apologize for any inconvenience, but I do hope you can overlook these flaws and mistakes and enjoy the read.

Thank you!

Genres:                     Slow romance, Comedy, Slice of life

Pairing:                   Read to find out.

Cameos:                   VARIOUS:  Kpop artists.

Point of View:       Universal Omniscient [means: I will write other characters' scenes and thoughts, too.]

Published Date:    November 5, 2013 [TUE]

End Date:                 August 8, 2017 | TUE

Status:                      Completed

Total Chapters:     102 has been edited down to 45 lengthy chapters for your (in)convenience. =)

List/Published:      24/9

Plot Summary: 

Hana and Luhan are two best friends who can tease and bully one another with no harsh feelings; however, their friendship takes a 180-degree turn when Luhan denies being the father of a cute little infant baby and Hana makes a decision to be involved in this family matter.

Foreword

About the Yuna Inspired Series [YIS]:

1st installment [for Japanese version featuring Ryosuke + Mirai, go here]


Author's Notes:

  • The bolding's for personal use.
  • An [*] means a change into a different scene.
  • When a sentence is italicized and NOT in quotes, it is the person's thoughts.
  • Any character's name colored in RED means that person is fictional. It will only be bolded once.
  • When a FEW WORDS are italicized, whether in quotes or in narrative text, it's an emphasize on the word.

This is mstyper with my 3rd story. If you're a previous subscriber/reader, thanks for sticking with me on this new fanfic. If you're a new subscriber/reader, thanks for trying out my kind of writing. I am NOT the best writer there is out there in regards to others, but I can promise that I will write with the best of my abilities.  A list of my fanfics can be found here.


AUTHOR: mstyper

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© 2013 All Rights Reserved

The main photo used for this fanfic was done by -Kyury-

[She's awesome!  She got it done within a day!  Thanks!]

mstyper
10/17/17 - Please do pay attention to the foreword, especially with the bold red headings. Thank you!

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ariannaiman1614 #1
Chapter 46: OMG ISTG THIS STORY IS SOOOOOOO AMAZINGGG!!! I swear i almost thought that she's going to marry kris tho TT.TT then after i read 'i love you too, Luhan' i was screaming!!! I legit said ' YESSS!!' and then i got scolded from my sister for shouting lol!! But overall this story is so amazing. I like how you write the story in detail bcs to me it gives more feels in it hahahaha. And the story is so touching that i almost cry!!! And wow i didn't know that the story is based from someone's lives and to me it's so awesome!!! I like how you deliver the story it's sooooo amazing!!! *thumbs up* and lastly, thank you so much for writing such beautiful yet touching story that i've ever read so far this story is one of my favourite!!!! Thank you so much!!♡
ariannaiman1614 #2
Chapter 99: This is sooo beautiful TT.TT i literally cried a little when hana said "please take care of my son" and also when taeyang said "I have a big wonderful family, and i am happy" omg this scene is sooo heart-warmingTT.TT thank you sooooo much for the update!!!!!
svang11 #3
Came back to check your story after a long while...and whoa. I missed a lot! haha. Will be binge-reading now. Thanks for the continuous updates!
ariannaiman1614 #4
Chapter 96: OMG finally all the secrets and misunderstanding has been answered!!!! Omg i cant wait to read the next chapterTT.TT better prepare some tissues just in case
xcriii
#5
Chapter 73: Thanks for updating^^
tonnettie
#6
Chapter 71: Chapters of bliss then here comes th consecutive chapters of heart ache
xcriii
#7
Chapter 71: Ahh sheesh. Hana! Please just admit it! Always broke my heart when i see Luhan and her in this kind of situation.
am_shy19 #8
Chapter 70: >_< The feels TT TT
ariannaiman1614 #9
Chapter 70: Omg i almost cried:'( what is hana trying to do?!?!?! Omg i need more answers TTTT too much sadness is killing me slowly yet painfully OTL btw,thank you for the update~~~~~♡