Fate

Melancholia

Fate /feɪt/

an event or a course of events that willinevitably happen in the future or the supposedforce or power that predetermines events.

 

 

I really believe, you were the greatest thing that ever happened to me.

no one's POV

“Mom! Wait! My soccer ball.” Myungsoo chased his ball when it rolled down to the other kid’s feet. He grabbed the ball and gave it to Myungsoo. He smiled when Myungsoo was practically begging for oxygen. Myungsoo was sure it wasn’t that far from where he first stood.

“Thank you.”

“You’re welcome. You look new here.”

“What do you know? You’re just a kid.”

“So do you.”

“Well I…”

“My name is Sungyeol.”

“I haven’t finished talking! Myungsoo. And yes I just moved in. My mom told me I could not talk to strangers though”

“I’m Sungyeol remember, you know my name. So we’re no longer strangers.”

“You’re such a a weird kid.”

“You are a kid too.”

“Yes true.” Myungsoo hesitated. The other kid was right though.

Sungyeol chuckled again.

“Can we be friends?” Myungsoo asked.

“What?”

“Be friends.”

“You told me I’m a weird kid.”

“That makes two of us then.”

“Okay.” Sung yeol smiled.

“Myung soo! Come quick! We need to go to the grocery store okay!” Myungsoo’s mom called.

“OKAAAAAY MOOOM” he replied. Screamed from the top of his lungs, “Where do you live???” he continued.

“Around the corner the one with the white fences.”

 

“That’s extremely near my apartment. So I guess I’ll be seeing you later! See you Sungyeol!” he said goodbye and waved. Sungyeol smiled. The first one he had for this whole tiring day for him.

"Sungyeol ah!" he heard his mom's voice and started running again, tried to find the best place to hide.

Please not again. I'm fine.

 

 

 

 

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hi guys! :D first chap is up. in case you're wondering. the italic sentences are sungyeol's mind. hihihi nice to meet you guys by the way. 

 

xx, ea.

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Sumayeol #1
Chapter 33: I’ve read this at 2022 and i am crying a lot like a can make a river of my tears this just too beautifull
InspiritChinita
#2
Chapter 33: This story really ripped my heart.
I am glad that I had the chance to read it.
It is wonderful.
makemeintelligent #3
Chapter 33: Chapter 32: really the end was something else.. . i can't describe it with my limited words. .. it really ripped my heart.. i can feel myungsoo... it was written soooooo beautifully that at some point i thought like i m the myungsoo of this story and i m sungyeol too... so far you've been the best story teller...

what i write yar... u know i m not expressive at all and i have never regretted it .. but now i m regreting that... its like i can feel the story but I can't tell how i felt... i hope u can understand my blabbering.... u were awesome, fantastic, best,and whatnot..... salute to you and pls write more stories like that... thanks for this wonderful story...

ps: myungyeol is my fav and only otp maybe thats y i can feel more ( and came across this story) ... but u have really written it so well... congratulations on your writing.. and all the best
Feby_Febiana #4
this is my nth time for me to read this amazing ff.. everytime I need myungyeol,I Will just go search this title and read it once again. i cant stop my feeling and giving you all of my thumps up for this author Nim..daebaakkk!!
khasabat #5
Chapter 33: You make me cry like crazy in the morning, how could my yeol gone?
Great story, I really like your story
YeoLalaland
#6
Chapter 33: I just found this, like, in 2016. u Im cryinggg
TEENTOP10031996 #7
Chapter 33: I literally cried, this is so sad
aena93 #8
Chapter 33: omg...this so ing sad... damn.. i was crying when reading this especially the last few chapters... it's tragically beautiful.... it bring out a various kind of emotions... i like they way you described their behaviour, characteristics and you did an amazing job on describing yeol's disease...the explanation did help though... the plot is also well developed... all i can say that this is amazing and beautiful... :)
pbpandaa
#9
Chapter 33: WHY'D YOU DO THIS TO ME AUTHORNIM!!!! MY TEARS WON'T STOP FALLING WAAA HUHUHUHU MY yeollieeeeee and myungsoo T.T very well its still beautiful!! And it hurts like a lot!! :'( i love myungyeol so much! :(( but then thankyou for writing this one! It inspires me really :) hwaiting! Hope you'll write more myungyeol fics! <3
AFFLover92 #10
Chapter 33: Hi there....
I'm here again.... crying again....T^T....TToTT....
Thank you for writing this amazing, wonderful story...