scar 5

the scar in my heart is you

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Two months later
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We were happy I was happy being with him everything was perfect and life never seem better he love me and I loved him back perfect that what I thought our relationship was , sure the whole ((distant relationship)) thing was hard but it was worth it

Yunho life was in Seoul his family friend work it made me Cana sad not binge able to be part of his world but as long as he loved me I was more than just happy, we talked on the phone every single day about every and anything we even had an hour long conversation about wither tomato was a fruit or a vegetable ya life was great I wish if it stayed like that.

He is coming here to day and I want to make a surprise for him I really wanted to make him happy so I decided to make cake I knew he liked sweet and the best way to a man heart is through his stomach so I went to the kitchen to start
Making it .half an hour later I was don,

It was only a 3 o'clock he was goanna be here in an hour, we were goanna watch a movie together and hopeful do something else too `naughty naughty `

I walked up stairs to my room to change my clothes I didn't want my boyfriend to think that I smelt like egg and I was cover with flower any way I needed a shower
After my shower I walked done stairs' again to make sure everything was ready , then I heard a knock on my door I got all excited thinking he's here he's here but it was `Satan`

"what do you want uncle " I really wasn’t in the mode for him

"I want the house Jae so when the hell you goanna give it to me " he was angrier than usual

"Never"

"you better watch your back boy sell me the house or ill find away to get it from you away that you won't like "

"Bring it on" and a slammed the door at his face >// \\\\\\<

After we were done he was still on top of me we just wouldn’t stop kissing me I was so tired but he just wouldn't stop I could only giggle at him truth is I didn't want him to stop ether this felling was the beast and I never want it to end .

"yunho " `softly`

"Yes `kiss` "

"Can you promise me something "`yawn

"Any `kiss` thing "

"I need you to promise me three things"

"Any `kiss` thing "

"Can you promise not to ever lie to me"

"`kiss` I can do that "

"can you promise not to cheat on me "

" I `kiss` can do that "

" can you promise not to break my heart "

"look at me jae I would never lie to you `kiss` , I would never break your heart , `kiss` and I would never ever cheat on you `kiss`that’s a promise I will never break. `kiss``kiss``kiss`”
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" promise "

"`kiss` I promise " he kiss me good night , that night was the happiest night of my life .. I would never forget this felling not ever.

`Jung yunho,, I love you , i'll love you for ever `
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{i dont do R- seen sorry ,, if my story please do tell , tell me were i should go next ok }

@@@@@@@@@@@ Alwayes keep the faith @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

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kristalesa
#1
Chapter 26: and yeah... she had returned. had to re-read from chap 1 to reminisce the plot ^^ still some words were quite confusing that I had ro think twice as ti what it means. Perhaps you can get a beta-reader? This story is too beautiful that it would be a waste not to be shared to more readers, right?
sunshineonu #2
Chapter 26: yep it's time for siwon to move on from jae..
sunshineonu #3
Chapter 26: woww..thank you dear author..
reading it right now.
sunshineonu #4
dear author..
can we hope for an update for this lovely fic..
pls don't abandon ..
Graciela24 #5
Chapter 2: Te puedo decir que en mi opinión escribes bien y tu historia es Linda,gracias.
kristalesa
#6
Your story is very good that’s why imp sticking up with it. It is simple yet very interesting. I may have pity siwon since he had been harboring feelings for jae for quite some time but I am happy that you are kind enough to give him a very good partner. If you want to lengthen your story more and had ran out of conflict, try bringing yunjae’s mom back. I will be waiting for the next update ^.^
kristalesa
#7
You really have problems with the grammar that the reader tends to misunderstand some scenes and take a lot of time to comprehend what was happening but then again, every writer starts with grammar and spelling difficulties. Just keep on writing and make sure to read articles about the usages of words. You always mistake broke for brock and others. Read the dictionary handbook and don’t be too harsh on yourself. Take it easy and in due time, you may be able to perfect it. Before posting your story, try to encode it using the Microsoft office word first. It will help you correct your mistakes.
Willidingding #8
great story :)