scar 14

the scar in my heart is you

------ After dinner in jae joong house ------

 

  After we ate dinner we sat in the living room watching some TV fooling a round a little but I was in another world .

 

I kept thinking god I have never been so happy to see siwon more than this moment, god my heart was goanna stop beating any second `stupid heart` he still look so dam hot .

 

No, no snap out of it jae joong you hate him remember he hurt you so just stop it `but his hot ` no , stop it , but ,no but ,it ,no ,a ,no `sigh`

 

`god have mercy on me `

 

"jae are you all right you been cana spacing out" asked worry .

 

"am fain it nothing `little smile` so how come you didn’t tell me that you were coming "

 

"I wan it to be a surprise , you like " `wiggling his eye brow `

 

"no , it was horrible " I was trying so hard to hid my laugh.

 

"your so mean " `pouting` "ya moon bin-na your umma is being mean "

 

"what ever "  ok let say that siwon defiantly didn’t see that one come in

 

"hhhhhhhhhhhh " I just laugh at him making him pout even more "aishhhhh stop pouting like a little kid it not cute "

 

"I hate you " hhh defiantly a kid.

 

" so how was your trip was it any fun " I asked.

 

"sure it was nice but I didn’t get to go out much " `pout`

 

" way not ?

 

"because I went there for work duh " rolling his eyes

 

"smart " sticking my tong out " but like Ill believe that the mighty siwon went to china just for work " as I walked to the kitchen.

 

He fallow me behind " why what did you thing I did " `wiggling eye brow` leaning on the kitchen door "

 

" bad thing "

 

" oh ya like what ?"

 

"you tell me " `smirk`

 

"why are you jealous baby , thinking I cheated behind your back " hugging me from behind .

 

"hhh in you dream now get off of me "

 

"so mean " and he sat on the kitchen char.

 

" what you doing any way "

 

"pop corn want some " ` smile`

 

"sure"

 

"ok go help moon bin with his home work tell am don "

 

"ok , baby "

 

"baby my " but he just laugh at me . `cute` yet `creepy`

 

---------------- at yunho house that night----------------

---yunho pov---

 

We were sitting in the living room watching some TV , Hankyung and I , he's my beast friend ever ,But I wasn’t baying any attention on what we were watching , and yunjae was a sleep so it was just me and him.

 

But my main was some were else , more like with some one els.

 

I can't believe it I actually saw him , hugged him, `want to kiss him` hhh `sigh` he was so beautiful ,

 

My heart can't stop beating aaaahhhhh I thing am goanna die, today is the happiest day of my life.

 

"ya ya ynhoooooooo , hello are you there " waiving his hand on my face.

" what , what " looking at now angry Hankyung , `he really hate to be ignored.

 

"what do you mean what I been talking to you for the past hour , what the hell you were thinking"

 

`smile` "I saw him"

 

"who??"

 

"jade jong who else "

 

"REALLY , WOW , WERE , HOW , WHEN , TELL ME , TELLME "jumping up and down. "what was he like , what did you say , no what did he say come on spell it out "

 

" come down honnie I only talked to him for like a sic `smile` I didn’t get to say anything "

 

"but I can tell that your happy "

 

"I am "

 

"that great cause I haven’t see you happy for the past 5 years "

 

"hhh I'm really happy that I saw him , but there was this guy "

 

"what guy "

 

"I don’t now but jae was so cozy with him, I didn’t like it" `pouting`

 

"maybe it his boy friend "

 

"ya "

 

"don’t yell at me , am just saying" `rolling his eye`

 

"you bad friend"

 

"any way what was he like "

 

"beautiful "

 

"really , more than me " `pout`

 

"hhh your beautiful honnie but jae is angle beautiful "

 

"ya am jealous "

 

"hhh you should be "

 

---- at jae house ----

 

We sat there watching tv and moon bin was seating between us and I couldn’t help but to feel like we were  a married couple , siwon was rapping his arm a round moon bin making him look like he was the appa

 

And I spaced out , thinking of yunho a gain , I saw him after all these years it was like a dream ,

How was he , did he eat well ,did he sleep right , did he get sick , did he… aishhhhhhhhhh way am I thinking like this  `sigh` why couldn’t he be more like siwon.

 

He is a nice guy, good looking, and has a great personality, hard working, cana cute at time's , all in all he is a catch. hhhh

 

I wish If I can fall for him it only be easy, But my heart just stuck , am stuck in I heat him love him thing I heat him for hurting me but I still love him in a way , this love is ing hard .

 

"what you thinking " he coat me off guard.

 

"nothing " I couldn’t help but to blush a little .

 

"are you ok "

 

"huh of course why ?" `nerves smile`.

 

" nothing it just that your face is all red "

 

"hhh really it must be the heat" `biting my lip`

 

" sure == or you were having some naughty thought a bout me  "`smirk`

 

"ya right " `rolling my eye` I cant belive I thought he was cute.

 

"why not" `pouting`

 

"what " `rising my eye brow`

 

"why didn’t you have naughty thought a bout me "

 

"huh , are serious" `frowning my eye brow`

 

"of course I am , am drop died smoking hot y " `confidently`

 

"oh my god ,  your such an idiot " and I pike up moon bin heading to the room .

"ya were you going "

"away from you I don’t want your stupid eddy leaking on my son you pabo "

 

"you so mean "

 

"whatever , don’t forget to lock the door behind you pabo " and I went to the bed room and closed the door behind me .

 

----siwon---

 

"he was totally having naughty thought a bout me "

 

--- jae bubble ----

"ya right , in your dream pabo "

 

"how mean".

 

---------------------yunho pov -------------------

 

After Hankyung left , I went to take a long shower and then off to bed , I lay there on my bed and all that happened today kept reply in my head .

 

I wonder, how can he be so beautiful I felt like it was the first time I saw him .

 

How come he have a son now , did he get married or something . His son was so beautiful just like him but there was something about him I couldn’t quit tell,

 

 and how was that guy

 

And how dare he call my jae joongiee , `pout` aishhhhh ,

 

Just wait Kim jae joong I'll make you fall in love with me again if it the last thing I do in my life ".

 

-------------- enjoy .... always keep the faith --------------   

 

 

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kristalesa
#1
Chapter 26: and yeah... she had returned. had to re-read from chap 1 to reminisce the plot ^^ still some words were quite confusing that I had ro think twice as ti what it means. Perhaps you can get a beta-reader? This story is too beautiful that it would be a waste not to be shared to more readers, right?
sunshineonu #2
Chapter 26: yep it's time for siwon to move on from jae..
sunshineonu #3
Chapter 26: woww..thank you dear author..
reading it right now.
sunshineonu #4
dear author..
can we hope for an update for this lovely fic..
pls don't abandon ..
Graciela24 #5
Chapter 2: Te puedo decir que en mi opinión escribes bien y tu historia es Linda,gracias.
kristalesa
#6
Your story is very good that’s why imp sticking up with it. It is simple yet very interesting. I may have pity siwon since he had been harboring feelings for jae for quite some time but I am happy that you are kind enough to give him a very good partner. If you want to lengthen your story more and had ran out of conflict, try bringing yunjae’s mom back. I will be waiting for the next update ^.^
kristalesa
#7
You really have problems with the grammar that the reader tends to misunderstand some scenes and take a lot of time to comprehend what was happening but then again, every writer starts with grammar and spelling difficulties. Just keep on writing and make sure to read articles about the usages of words. You always mistake broke for brock and others. Read the dictionary handbook and don’t be too harsh on yourself. Take it easy and in due time, you may be able to perfect it. Before posting your story, try to encode it using the Microsoft office word first. It will help you correct your mistakes.
Willidingding #8
great story :)