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the scar in my heart is you

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yunho waided his eyes he couldnt belive what he just heard, maybe his ears were playing a trik on him .

"are you sure"'

''ya , yeas a, sure''

ók ill go wach up '

" ok , ill help yunjae geting ready for bed ''

minute later

''yunho are you ok you been there foever '''

''umm, ya am ok it just that , ouch ''

''what wrong''

''nothing'' but jae didnt beilive him he opend the door to see yunho standing withe his hand in the sink under water 

''omo what happen to your hand''

''oh'smile' nothing the glass brock i tried to pick it up and''

''you cut your hand''"

''ya''

jae looked at him withe werry eyes but yunho kept on smiling

''what''

''nothing , it just that i missed this''

''what ''

''that werry look in your eyes , for me 'smile' ''

"blush , shut up jung and come here let me see ''

----  later on ----

''all done come on let go get ready for bed''

''carefull there jae joong-ah''

''huh 1-2-3 'blush' shut up yunho''

''ok dont be all mad hhhhhh''

 

yunho tryed to open up his shirt so he can go to sleep but the cut in his hand hurt evrey time he tryed , he was having a reall hard time with it , suddnly he felt a pare of hands on his , so warm , so femeler , so gental and he liked it .

the room was a little dark and the moon light on jae face made him more beautiful in yunho eyes than ever.

''your beatiful"'

'rolling eyé'

yunho pout , after he was done withe yunho shirt his hand travel done to un-louk his pants yunho had a smirk on his face that jaee missed,

''why are you looking at me like this ''

''nothing, it just that , are you sure you want to do this'smirk' "

''huh''

1

2

3

''you ert''

''hhhhhh''

''shut up 'frown' ''

''ok , ok sorry but 'closer' you look so un beliveplly hut right now 'kiss' ''

jae smiled in to the kiss , he felt like flying ''let go to bed ok ''

''fain''

jae sleept next to moon been , yunho next to yunjae making there kids sleeping in the meddle

''i want to say this , i want to say that you are the one for me jae , the only one , you , yunjae , moon bin , are my number one persons in this holl wourld and i will do everything i can to protect you , i promise ""

''ï belive you 'yawn' yuniee ''

yunho wached jae fall a sleep , he felt loucky beyond words he toke jae hand in to his falling a sleep thinking

''i will hold on to for ever , i promise ''

 

------jinki and top -------

''go away topi want to sleep '' jinki wind

it been like this for the past hour , jinki love top but he was far frome ready to let him sleep on the same room , they havend sheard one roon not since he start liking him .

and top is a poreve.

''please ill be good '' pouppy eye'

''no''

''but''

no''

''come on only this once''

''no''

''you dont love me that way''

''fain , 'sigh' only this once , if you tryed any think , your died ''

'' 'smirk' i wont , not much''

''ya''

''come here gorgouse '' pikink him up and throuing him on the bed withe him on top

''ya let me go ''

''your too beauteful for me to hold back , am so glad , and i feel so loucky to have you in my life ,you are the beast thing that ever hapeend to me , i love , only you , lee onew jinki , and for you to love me back is the geatest think i can ever hope for , to hold you in my arm , to feel you , to bee withe you is a magical , and for you to love aome on so un-perfect like me is , 'smile' am loucky''

'' am really happy , that you love me , i feel the same way you do a bout me 'sob' i love you even if you were so unperfect , and a porve''

'' all show you the porve '' lening down capshering his lip . the kissed and kissed in tell they feel a sleep in eachother amr

----siwon----

siwon have this un known feeling in his heart , hes heart was skiping more that it usual self, it didnt bother him at first , but what will happen tomowerow difantlly will.

 

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sorry for the late up mianhe am so sorry , and thank you so much for the comment ok . it mean so much to me ,

love you all , comment are wanted

---------------------------------------------------always keep the faith ...........................................

 

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kristalesa
#1
Chapter 26: and yeah... she had returned. had to re-read from chap 1 to reminisce the plot ^^ still some words were quite confusing that I had ro think twice as ti what it means. Perhaps you can get a beta-reader? This story is too beautiful that it would be a waste not to be shared to more readers, right?
sunshineonu #2
Chapter 26: yep it's time for siwon to move on from jae..
sunshineonu #3
Chapter 26: woww..thank you dear author..
reading it right now.
sunshineonu #4
dear author..
can we hope for an update for this lovely fic..
pls don't abandon ..
Graciela24 #5
Chapter 2: Te puedo decir que en mi opinión escribes bien y tu historia es Linda,gracias.
kristalesa
#6
Your story is very good that’s why imp sticking up with it. It is simple yet very interesting. I may have pity siwon since he had been harboring feelings for jae for quite some time but I am happy that you are kind enough to give him a very good partner. If you want to lengthen your story more and had ran out of conflict, try bringing yunjae’s mom back. I will be waiting for the next update ^.^
kristalesa
#7
You really have problems with the grammar that the reader tends to misunderstand some scenes and take a lot of time to comprehend what was happening but then again, every writer starts with grammar and spelling difficulties. Just keep on writing and make sure to read articles about the usages of words. You always mistake broke for brock and others. Read the dictionary handbook and don’t be too harsh on yourself. Take it easy and in due time, you may be able to perfect it. Before posting your story, try to encode it using the Microsoft office word first. It will help you correct your mistakes.
Willidingding #8
great story :)