scar 22

the scar in my heart is you

Just blushed and looked a wAy.
"Umma " moon bin yelled
"Appa, are you ok " hugging yunho
"Ya am ok " 'he smiled wail looking At jae ' "am defiantly ok ".
"So are you two gonna set there all night long or what "top yelled
"Shut up " yunho yelled again .Top just laugh

YunHo helped jAe stand up ,and jae felt extremely shy when yunho held his hand it made him blush like a night school giRl
"So ill walk you to your room. Ok " jae nodded

---- jae pov ----
I cant believe what just happen , it feel like a dream , maybe it is a dream , am not so sure what too call it how to feel. About it

I keep asking my self did this really happEn
Am i in a dream, house if i am dreaming i don't ever want to wake up

We walked in since our children so slept the can hardly walk

"Umma am so tired "
"Oh 'smile' sorry baby ,hEre let me cary you " i was a bout to pick him up when yunho said
"Come here son ill cary you" 'my heart skip'

He picked him up , moon bin rest his heAd on his shoulder the look like the know tech other forever it made me want tO cry .
Before. I knew it i felt pear of hands touching main i looked and he was looking at me back , he Flashed me the most shines smile ever and i wished
God if this is a dream i. Don't ever want to wake uP from .

We reached our room , and moon bin. WaS all ready asleep and yunjae could pearly keep hiS eyes opens

"SO "
"So".
"It cwait the dAy i'sn it " 'smile'
"Yes. Yunho it. Cwait the daY , it was so".
"What "
"So sereal "
"'Smile' but am glad to know the truth"
"Am glad that you know th truth two yunho " we kept looking At each otheR Smiling , gad my face on fair all dAy. , i don't think this is healthy
Gad i feel like a high school giRl all over again
"Here give him to me " reaching for moon bin but
"No way , i ill do it "
"But he must be havee here let me do it "
"I sid no , so no , noW open the door And move it y "'skip'
"'BlusH' shut up yunho"
We in the room and he put moon bin on the bed , than he crossed his head gently "he look so much like you "he said .
"Umm. I don't think so ,he look more like you than you think 'smile'"
"Umm appa 'yawn' am so sleepy can we stay here for tonight "
"No sorry but we have to go so come on"
The next. Word that come out of my motH was very un expected- not. From me at Least.

"Stay" ......

Sorry it short but between my jop and writting i dont really have much time i wish if it didnt take this long but i guess it just life
Anyway hope you like it please comment
Love ,,, hAna .... Alwayes keep the fAith

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kristalesa
#1
Chapter 26: and yeah... she had returned. had to re-read from chap 1 to reminisce the plot ^^ still some words were quite confusing that I had ro think twice as ti what it means. Perhaps you can get a beta-reader? This story is too beautiful that it would be a waste not to be shared to more readers, right?
sunshineonu #2
Chapter 26: yep it's time for siwon to move on from jae..
sunshineonu #3
Chapter 26: woww..thank you dear author..
reading it right now.
sunshineonu #4
dear author..
can we hope for an update for this lovely fic..
pls don't abandon ..
Graciela24 #5
Chapter 2: Te puedo decir que en mi opinión escribes bien y tu historia es Linda,gracias.
kristalesa
#6
Your story is very good that’s why imp sticking up with it. It is simple yet very interesting. I may have pity siwon since he had been harboring feelings for jae for quite some time but I am happy that you are kind enough to give him a very good partner. If you want to lengthen your story more and had ran out of conflict, try bringing yunjae’s mom back. I will be waiting for the next update ^.^
kristalesa
#7
You really have problems with the grammar that the reader tends to misunderstand some scenes and take a lot of time to comprehend what was happening but then again, every writer starts with grammar and spelling difficulties. Just keep on writing and make sure to read articles about the usages of words. You always mistake broke for brock and others. Read the dictionary handbook and don’t be too harsh on yourself. Take it easy and in due time, you may be able to perfect it. Before posting your story, try to encode it using the Microsoft office word first. It will help you correct your mistakes.
Willidingding #8
great story :)