Chapter 16: Is This The End?

Never a Replacement.

 

When everyone reached Hara’s house, it was past midnight. Doojoon, Hyuna and Teukkie were brought into rooms and the doctor took care of them.

Yoseob, Hyunseung, Dongwoon and IU were all tired, so Hara’s maid led them to the 2nd floor, where all the bedrooms were. You looked around, amazed at the size of the place. It really was like a mansion.

Standing 5 floors high, Hara’s house had a really… techno feeling. Modern, filled with mostly the color black, white and red. You couldn’t stop looking at all the cool stuff in her house.

Gikwang walked towards you, with the words ‘guilt’ written on his face. ‘I’m really really really really really really sorry!’ He stood in front of you, looking at his shoes, twiddling his fingers. You smiled.

‘It’s ok.’ You couldn’t blame Gikwang for anything, he was too… innocent. You know that if Gikwang hadn’t told the men where Junhyung was, all of this wouldn’t happen. But everything was over, so you might as well forgive Gikwang.

Gikwang looked up at you with his teary eyes, like a little kid. You patted his head, not knowing what to do. And then all of a sudden, he just broke into tears. You unconsciously pulled him towards you, hugging him. Your tears starting falling too.

When the both of you finally stopped, the house was quiet. Leeteuk, Hyuna and Doojoon were all fine, and they were sleeping. Kevin was sleeping beside Hyuna, while Gayoon was beside Doojoon.

Gikwang wiped off his tears, looking at Doojoon and Gayoon. ‘Doojoonie’s gonna happy when he wakes up to see Gayoon beside him. Kekee.’ Gikwang chuckled, and gave you a bright smile. You looked at his eyes. They were so pretty, especially when he smiled.

He didn’t notice that you were slightly attracted to him, and he continued mumbling about skipping school tomorrow. You snapped out of it, blinking. ‘Gikwang-ah, do you wanna go sleep first? I want to wait here for Junhyung.’ Junhyung probably won’t come back that fast, and you wanted to see him.

‘Yah. You guys wanna take a bath?’ Hara walked down the stairs, wiping her hair dry. She smelled like soap. And then you realized how dirty you were. Gikwang responded first.

‘Yes please!’ He used his aegyo. Hara showed him the way, and walked towards you. ‘Only Gikwang can stay so happy and bright even after all we’ve just went through.’ She said, shaking her head, sustaining a smile. ‘There’s another bathroom there.’ She pointed at the direction of the bathroom, eyeing your dirty clothes.

‘There’s a door in the bathroom that leads to the wardrobe, you can find clothes your size there. Goodnight, I’m gonna sleep.’ Hara walked upstairs. You blinked. ‘G-goodnight.’ You said softly.

When you walked into the bathroom, you were totally… mindblown. It was mirrors everywhere, a huge bathtub, all sorts of shower gels and face cleansers, all arranged neatly. You didn’t bother turning the heater on, you wanted a cold bath to keep you awake.

After you were done, you wrapped yourself in a towel, and walked into the wardrobe. You were once again, mindblown. It was bigger than your whole room, and you thought your room was big already. Filled with clothes, shoes, pants, and even innerwear. The clothes had few with similar patterns, and different sizes.

You wondered who would ever finish wearing all of the things in there. Your looked around, and found a cupboard full of hoodies. All of them were just awesome, and you thought of bringing them home someday. Heh.

At last, you picked a white hoodie, with a cute cartoon on it. Yes, you were still childish. You found some baggy pants and put them on. When you walked into the hall, there was no one there. Everyone was sleeping, even Gikwang.

You sighed. It was going to be a long wait for Junhyung, and there was nothing to keep you awake. You decided you’d sit on the sofa and watch some telly, but you eventually fell asleep.

Gunshots rang in your ears, everyone one was crying or shouting, there was blood everywhere. And Junhyung was right in front of you. You reached forward, but before you managed to hold him, he fell onto the floor. His white shirt turn red and he was dead in seconds.

You woke up in sweat, panting, and you felt tears on your face. You were still in Hara’s living room. ‘Okay… it was just a dream.’ You thought. You tried to calm yourself down, but your heartbeat was still fast. You looked at the clock.

4a.m. in the morning. Junhyung should be coming soon. You sat up, wiping your sweat and tears. The doorbell rang. You ran to the door, and opened it without checking who it was. Junhyung walked in, his eyes red and tired.

You hugged him, not noticing his foul smell of sweat, blood, and some other weird smells. He winced a little, because the wound where Hara’s men gave him a few days before still hurt.

You led him to the couch, and the both of you sat down, side by side. The telly was still on, and some cooking show was on. Junhyung spoke first. ‘You okay?’ His voice was hoarse. You nodded.

He hugged you. ‘I’m sorry. Lets have pancakes for breakfast later.’ You smiled for the first time in a while. ‘After I take a bath.’ Junhyung left a kiss on your forehead and made his way to the bathroom.

*endofchapter.

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Well, well. To answer the title of this chapter, no, it isn't. 

But the next chapter will be. A super long one. Also the ending to my first fanfic ever completed. Ha ha.

Lol but seriously, suggest some groups or characters for me to write a fanfic about. Pwetty pweaseee. :3

 

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Park_HyeSun #1
Chapter 18: Well, let me just start by saying that I have a lot of thoughts about this story of yours, my friend. Both good and bad. I suppose the bad ones should come first? ^^;

The story line is quite decent, but actually if one is to look closer, one would identify a handful of loopholes. There are some things that are questionable as well, but seeing that this is your first story - actually I am able to see that you have improved. Good job! c:

Also, when I was reading this, I noted that you have odd kinds of errors. Aside from the typical typos (which seriously happens to everyone), I have decided to rule out one or two oddities that is in your story. I hope I don't sound mean or condescending. Sobs.

Example being that you used the word (thought) when you intended to use the word (taught) instead for a sentence. Plus, when you mentioned that the reader and Dongwoon are related, the word (were) should be (are) in the sentence (We were twins.). This is because you guys still are twins, I mean - how does one stop that abruptly? Aha, just saying. It was rephrased since I can't remember what chapter it came from and I believe that you already knew about that.

I understand if you can't allocate time to "improve" on the errors because truly, it takes a lot of time. Seriously. /shakes head at self/

Now for the good part! ^^ Sobs I write too long. Do you hate me already.

Personally, I found this story to be leaning on the bubbly and cheery side, despite the circumstances and the darkening plot that takes place during the later chapters. I did find myself experiencing chills even though I had predicted what would happen already. It did happen, actually. The matters that I had predicted and assumed. Remember though, just because a story is predictable doesn't mean that it isn't a fine, praiseworthy piece.

So, I would just like to say that I did not regret reading this! (: I do understand the story and I really think that you placed a wondrous title, even if it is simple.
gGiakh
#2
Chapter 18: ^^ so amazingly cute i totaly loved it ^.^
Zaiinatul #3
Oh, complete already. Thanks for the story. It's not too long butyou really know how to make it good :)
cbabes
#4
Chapter 15: Oh dang, poor jihye. I like how hyunseung was caring for hyuna, lol sorry im a 2hyun shipper. but anyways, so sad.. Hope everything goes back to good!
gGiakh
#5
Chapter 14: -->>
Whatever your next fanfic will be i will still be addicted.
cbabes
#6
Chapter 14: WAIT! cliffhanger?! I like your style :D LOLOL but daaaaamn, who got shot!?!?!
41R33N
#7
Chapter 14: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Author-nim, you make me go grustrated. Update ASAP. I want to know who got shot
gGiakh
#8
Chapter 13: ahh... im addicted to this story<3
41R33N
#9
Chapter 13: Please dont make it cliffhanger
gGiakh
#10
Chapter 12: god dern it this is the last chapter , i haven't read it yet i dont want to because i'll be waiting for the continue too desperate
keep the good work ^^