Hyo Rin ah!

Super Junior Fullhouse

 

At the field…

As Donghae and Alice continued on, Alice began picking up the pace, and began scoring consecutively. She was as fast as lightning and it seemed like she was going to tear up the field. As she lifted her leg up to kick her last and final goal, it jerked to a halt, and Alice collapsed down to the ground.

“Hyo Rin!!” cried Donghae as he ran toward her.

“Hyo Rin!!” shouted the others as the raced toward her.

“I’m fine…” she whispered.

“Hyo Rin!” yelled Han Geng. “Hang in there, okay?!”

“Someone please call the ambulance,” Eva said in a calm voice. Looks like its bad this time.

“Ah! Okay! I got it!” exclaimed one of the members.

Han Geng stared in horror, remembering Eva’s words…

She just breaks down. Drops to the ground, starts sweating like heck, says that she’s okay but squeezes her eyes in pain, and then passes out…

And the night they sparred…

So she wasn’t joking when she said her knees hurt!

*Chinese

“Hyo Rin ah! How can you be such an idiot!?” Han Geng cried as he tried to wipe away the sweat trickling down her face with a towel.

*korean

“I’m fine…” she whispered again.

*Chinese

“No! you’re not fine! Don’t go on doing stupid stuff! You know this isn’t supposed to help you!” he angrily replied.

“I don’t…know…what..you mean…” she answered and fell into unconsciousness.

“Hyo Rin!!”

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Derpling
#1
Chapter 34: For my opinion, I think its fine the way It is
Them plopping outta no where its funnier like that:D
It would be better if you could kind of add a little of them but either way its fine~~
By the way
GREAT JOB!! IT WAS AWESOMEE
Derpling
#2
Chapter 29: OMG OMG NAH NO OMG ITS OMO OMOMOMOMO! THIS IS AWESOME! I HOPE SHE STAYS WITH HANG GENG HES LIKE MORE GENTLE AND HE KNOWS HER PAST LOVE IT UNNIE!
Derpling
#3
Chapter 28: UNNNNNIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE PLEASE UPDATEEE! THIS IS AWESOMEE!!!
SujuShidae24 #4
Chapter 23: LOL...kudos for a very suitable title for this chapter...Hyorin is quite a tease... XD
octa82_ichigo #5
Chapter 24: Next chapter please ....... ;)
evilminic00kies #6
Chapter 23: If I was Hyorin, I'd be dying trying to keep my laughter in. Geez the boys' reaction towards her xD
sunshinexgirl #7
Chapter 22: This is too cute! I love the interactions between Siwon and Alice! ^^ Ohh I can't wait to see how the others react to Alice's new look, and especially what Hangeng will think kekeke I love this story so much! Hwaiting!!! <3
sunshinexgirl #8
Chapter 20: WOAH OMG HANGENG VS SIWON!!!!
This is getting exciting! ^^
Bahahahaha~~~ Hangeng hitting Hyukkie with a pillow xD
sunshinexgirl #9
Chapter 19: That chapter had me squealing and fangirling! It was so cute!!!
Yes, I love the way you wrote it ^^
Seriously can't wait for the update~~ Hwaiting!!!
KookieMonster
#10
OMG.OMINGGOSH. NUUUU. ALICE. STAY STRONG ;~; Stupid Evil loan sharks and ''Master'' Gee you sure know how to write dramas LOL