Chapter 10

The Monster In My Head
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Suga opened the passenger side door for Jin Ae to get in and after closing the door, he made his way towards the drivers seat and strapped himself in. The drive was hardly going to take 10 minutes but what Jin Ae didn't know was that 10 minutes could make a lot of difference, specially when your secret is in the verge of been exposed to a person you hardly know.

Due to the heavy rain the traffic was moving in very slowly, no one was able to see the road ahead clearly and the lighting and thunder were of no help either.

It had been 5 minutes since the duo started the ride and no one had uttered a single word.

Suga was busy thinking of a 'not so obvious' way to talk to Jin Ae when a car suddenly overtook them and turned right. Yoongi hit the brakes abruptly to avoid any sort of collision while the other car continued on it's way like nothing happened.

"Ahh Sibal!" - Yoongi cursed  before turning to see if Jin Ae was hurt.

"Jin Ae - shi? Are you alright?" - Yoongi asked but was greeted with no response.

"Jin Ae - shi?" - Yoongi gently touched her.

"Jin - Ae!?" - but the girl never responded.

 

 

Running through the traffic, she screamed her lungs out, calling death to take her away. The cars passed dangerously close to her, several lights blinded her, the continuous honking made her go deaf, she was slowly losing all her senses. She couldn't handle it anymore, the fear was swallowing her alive, the darkness was eating her out, the deaths she witnessed were haunting her. She wanted freedom from everything. And just when she thought she reached the end of her journey she got pulled into a different scenario.

 

"How long did you think you could avoid me?" - the dark entity asked, it's power enough to take Jin Ae's life right out of her.

Jin Ae stood in a deserted alley, it was a deserted town with not a single human near by, not even a single bird present there. It was place with no life in it.

"Who ... who are you?" - Jin Ae stammered, her voice betraying her.

"Oh dear you don't need to know all that, all you have to do is hand over your body to me." - The entity slowly formed a human form but it was just a shadow, there was no body, no face. Only a dark soul.

"Stay away from me!" - Jin Ae warned, stepping away from the entity and making a run to save herself.

"Where do you think you are going?" - the entity appeared right in front of her making Jin Ae gasp in fear.

First time in her life Jin Ae came across something so horrifying.

"Don't try running away from me, you can't escape me." - the entity laughed out loudly before firmly gripping Jin Ae's neck cutting off her air supply. Her hands continuously hitting the entity, trying to free herself from it's grasp but nothing was working. She was struggling to breath while the entity was having fun witnessing it.

"Save me" - Jin Ae pleaded to anyone who could hear her.

"Save me,please" - Jin Ae kept pleading, tears flowing down her face.

She was taking her final breath when she left the grip around her neck getting loose, the only thing she could manage to see before passing out were a pair of black shoes.

 

 

"Jin Ae !?" - the worried voice rang through her ears, bringing her bak to her senses.

"Jin Ae get up! God Damit!" - Yoongi shook Jin Ae continuously.

"Yoongi -shi?" 

After hearing Jin Ae's soft voice, Yoongi finally let go of the breath he had been holding onto.

"What happened!?" - Yoongi questioned, slowly leaning away from Jin Ae to give her the space she needed.

"Huh?" - Jin Ae questioned, still feeling dizzy f

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[The Monster In My Head] Chapter 27 is up ! My ghosts and me hope you like the chapter kekekekek ヽ(^。^)ノ

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AileeAloya #1
Chapter 31: I knew it...i knew it...Jeo sung was something else...evil demon?..grim reaper?...for a time i though he was the incarnetaion of Yoongi's friend...hahaha...Author nim..pls cont ur stories later..Fighting
Chimswae
#2
Chapter 31: Jeo Sung is so shady and always give me wrong impression most of the time. For an odd reason, I am seeing him in inhuman way like he is dangerous to be around her and he's using her for her own benefit. Jeosung is a complicated character tbh.
bhatikar
#3
Chapter 31: * stares at all the new twists and turns with wide open eyes O_o*

Hmm...one thing for sure, Jeo Seung is definitely not a MORTAL!
All the ghosts bow down to him?
Who is he or What is he??? @_@

I feel so bad for Jin Ae. She had a really terrible day. Although I don't totally trust Jeo Seung with her, I'm glad he was there for her at the end and that she let out all her emotions with him. I hope she feels better with time.

And whatever Jeo Seung said about the miracles, blessings and curses in disguise, he seemed to have a point in that.
But what did he mean when he said that he was with her since her father's death and will be, till her last breath?....it gives a shivering feeling to me.
Does he mean to be some guardian to watch her over..?

But again! Than he also warned her NOT to trust him or his words!
What is he exactly playing at.... @_@

And this new addition Keres! She seems like a intriguing character! She may feel like a kid, but does posses darkness. What does she want to possess Jin Ae's soul??
That too she called him brother and also spoke his uncertain death?
Now Jeo Seung's life is on the line??

Wow! This chapter has definitely plunged me into questions!! But I'm surely enjoying it! ^^
I like how you are showing more and more of Jeo Seung's character, but in a steady manner.
Also, the whole mention of miracles, devils and ghosts seem to really set the story in a good supernatural set! :D Well done!
THANKS A LOT FOR THE UPDATE AUTHOR-NIM!^_^
ALTHOUGH YOU HAVE LEFT ME WITH MORE QUESTIONS THAN ANSWERS I AM REALLY DIGGING FOR MORE! XD



I know the past couple of days have really been difficult for us...
It was a really unfortunate incident to occur and as you said, those particular words have certainly left a different imprint on our hearts.
Stay strong author-nim! And don't worry about the story. Take your time to get back in the form.
R.I.P Jonghyun
RockabillyHippie
#4
Chapter 31: Writing has been difficult for me this past week as well. SHINee was one of my first kpop groups because of the Boys Over Flowers ost and that drama had been my second kdrama. The group meant a lot to me. I'm not a huge fan of SM as a company but the artists under them were all my favorites so Jonghyun's passing has thrown me off balance for a lack of a better term. But I'm slowly feeling myself get back to normal, especially because I've been spending time with loved ones. I really loved this chapter especially because we learn more about Jeo Seung and the little girl who we now know is Keres. This is putting me on the edge of my seat!
nuz123
#5
Chapter 31: What is this Jeo Seung?? Who is this lil sister?!
Chimswae
#6
Chapter 30: To see this story unfold this way is giving me a rollecoaster feeling.. it feels so right and just so wrong at the same time. There are so much things going on between jiae and namjoon and yoongi. I am trying to digest every single thing here hahaha guess I am er when it comes to emotional and complicated relationship . U wrote the emotional paet so well. Kudos to you :')
bhatikar
#7
Chapter 30: NOOO!!!NAMJOON!!!!
Get a grip on your thoughts!
Damn! He has given rise to so many MISUNDERSTANDINGS!!

Seriously, this was the most angst and dramatic chapter ever! Strangely....I like it..:P....

But it was heart-wrenching to see all of them getting hurt thought! T^T
Silly Namjoon! He has no idea about Jin Ae's and Yoongi's world, but instead comes up with such theories....even when she told him the truth...I was expecting him to blow-over like that!
Feel really bad for his heart though...he seems so ignorant of the truth and so broken now...
(I was clutching my hair at his assumptions>_<)

And poor Jin Ae, as if her life was not already messed up, now has to deal with these new chaos!
His words sure did seem like bullets ripping her apart from the inside...
And he didn't even here her confession!

While Yoongi is like always! Trying to hush his pain out even if he is dying from the inside in doing so.>_<
Although I'm glad he didn't say anything harsh to Namjoon in anger! He seemed to handle the situation well...
I hope things will turn around for him.....

And last but not the least..Jeo Seung has appeared! Wonder what he is up to with the other guy....:/

The feels of this chapter really got me though!! O_o
You really topped the drama author-nim!! Good Job! ^_^
I seriously would love such more drama from you....But right now, I so want the things to clear up between them!!
(But I'm ready for drama....:P)

Thanks for the update!!<3
BilliePark #8
Chapter 30: Well he really is an idiot for overthinking. That hurts.
RockabillyHippie
#9
Chapter 30: NAMJOON! WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM, MY GUY?! OOOOOOOOHHHHH MMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GAAAAAAAHD!!!!!!
HoneyFei20
#10
Chapter 30: Wow...Namjoon made me cry....How can you not understand Jin Ae?????? She loves you and you don't even believe her..... sigh.