Chapter 1

The Monster In My Head
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"There was once a girl who met spirits in her dreams, her job was simply to grant the wishes of each spirit she met. If she couldn't full fill the task given to her, she would have the spirit follow her forever."

"She was like an orb of light and hope to the deceased who had an unfair death."

 

"Have you ever met someone like that?" - the curious women asked.

The shaman just smiled in response.

 

 

"Yah Ji hyo- ah!"

"Hmmmm " - Ji hyo replied diverting her attention from the cell phone to her friend.

"The girls are staying over at my place since the place destined for the fan meet is closer to my house. Wanna join ?" - her friend chirped excited to have a girls night out.

"Really!?" - Ji hyo yelled in joy.

"YES!" 

"Wawww~ I'm in." 

"yes! Come on let's go!" 

"Wait! I still need to go home to get a pair of clothes to change into tomorrow." - Ji hyo said rushing towards the zebra crossing.

"But you can change into mine." - Her friend replied running closely behind her.

At that exact moment the light turned green.

"I need to get the gifts I made for them too." - Ji hyo replied running through the crossing but stopped in her tracks when she went blind by the headlights and at the very next second her body was thrown 5 feet off the ground and with a hard impact she fell on the road. Her head bleeding profusely.

"Andwe" - her friend's voice echoed through the heavy traffic.

 

 

"No! No! No! " - Jin Ae  kept on mumbling - "someone call 119! She still hasn't taken her last breath! Please!"

 Jin Ae rushed to Ji hyo's friend who was holding onto Ji hyo's almost dead body.

"Keep her alive! She isn't dead! " -  Jin Ae pleaded to Ji hyo's friend but nobody heard her, nobody saw her.

​​​​​​How could they ? She wasn't physically present there.

"How many times have I told you to not involve yourself in other people's life? You will disturb the balance between the dead and the living if you save a soul that's supposed to die" - a voice echoed making Jin Ae gasp in fear as she recognized voice. It was a voice she was most afraid to hear. Without any further delay she ran away from the scene.

 

Gasping for air and Drenched in sweat, Jin Ae reached back home and made her way to the bathroom to wash her face.

As she switched on the light to the bathroom a familiar face popped out.

Her school uniform covered in blood, a huge opening in her head ,flesh hanging out and a part of her brain visible, half of her face was cracked and there was yellow fluid oozing out from it.

The sudden invasion startled Jin Ae causing her to close her eyes in reflex.

"Ji hyo" 

 

As soon as Ji hyo heard her name from the stranger's mouth , her eyes shot open.

"Do you know me!? You ! You can see me !?" - Ji hyo yelped in surprise while Jin Ae could only let out a sigh.

Jin Ae walked past Ji hyo, to the sink to wash her face.

"Yah! You can see me right!!" - Ji Hyo yelled out of frustration.

"Yaah? Yah? Yah!?" - Jin Ae's pitch increased an octave higher with each 'yah'.

" I'm older than you! Don't you dare refer to me as 'yah'!" - Jin Ae shot back at the dead girl but didn't look at her. The sight of the fresh wounds made her want to puke.

"Waaww ~ So I'm not going to heaven ? I mean it's not like in the 16 years of my life I made any huge sins. When you had decided to take my life couldn't you atleast send me to heaven. But no! Looks like I'm going to be stuck here forever!" - Ji hyo kept on blurting random things, following Jin Ae around the small roof top apartment.

"You are lucky." - Jin Ae replied sitting on her bed.

"Huh?"

"He is giving you a chance to full fill your last wish. I'm someone who is allowed to see the deceased souls who are blessed enough to full fill their last wish even after dying or to those who are truly in need of a wish to be fulfilled."

"So wait are you telling me you can full fill my wish?"

"Yes. But only the wish you had during the time of your death."

"Daebak~!" - Ji hyo screamed leaving Jin Ae baffled at her reaction.

"Oh no don't misunderstand me. I'm very sad, I mean seriously I'm dead but...." - Ji Hyo looked around the room trying to gather correct words to explain herself - " I... I at least get to see Bangtan before going to where ever it is I'm going!"

Jin Ae wasn't shocked at her revelation as this wasn't her first time listening to people's absurd last wishes they had before they died.

 

"So your last wish was to attend their fan meet?"

"Yes."

"Then do you promise to leave from here and go back to where you belong?"

"Yes"

"Alright." - a deal was sealed with a handshake, both the hands slightly illuminating with a subtle purple light, marking Jin Ae 's wrist with a symbol. With the last word said Jin Ae got up with a jolt, gasping for air.

 

Sitting up straight, Jin Ae could only sigh. She hated falling asleep.

No.

She hated been asleep when people died because she used to be the one to witness the person's death and then deal with their last wishes. She wasn't a grim reaper.  She wasn't a mystical being. She was just a normal girl with a special ability, someone who used to unknowingly become the last ray of hope to the deceased soul for fulfilling their dying wish.

Not every person whose death she witnessed came to her, just 9 out of 10 people.The dead usually came to her to have their final goodbye messages conveyed to their loved ones making her an em

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AileeAloya #1
Chapter 31: I knew it...i knew it...Jeo sung was something else...evil demon?..grim reaper?...for a time i though he was the incarnetaion of Yoongi's friend...hahaha...Author nim..pls cont ur stories later..Fighting
Chimswae
#2
Chapter 31: Jeo Sung is so shady and always give me wrong impression most of the time. For an odd reason, I am seeing him in inhuman way like he is dangerous to be around her and he's using her for her own benefit. Jeosung is a complicated character tbh.
bhatikar
#3
Chapter 31: * stares at all the new twists and turns with wide open eyes O_o*

Hmm...one thing for sure, Jeo Seung is definitely not a MORTAL!
All the ghosts bow down to him?
Who is he or What is he??? @_@

I feel so bad for Jin Ae. She had a really terrible day. Although I don't totally trust Jeo Seung with her, I'm glad he was there for her at the end and that she let out all her emotions with him. I hope she feels better with time.

And whatever Jeo Seung said about the miracles, blessings and curses in disguise, he seemed to have a point in that.
But what did he mean when he said that he was with her since her father's death and will be, till her last breath?....it gives a shivering feeling to me.
Does he mean to be some guardian to watch her over..?

But again! Than he also warned her NOT to trust him or his words!
What is he exactly playing at.... @_@

And this new addition Keres! She seems like a intriguing character! She may feel like a kid, but does posses darkness. What does she want to possess Jin Ae's soul??
That too she called him brother and also spoke his uncertain death?
Now Jeo Seung's life is on the line??

Wow! This chapter has definitely plunged me into questions!! But I'm surely enjoying it! ^^
I like how you are showing more and more of Jeo Seung's character, but in a steady manner.
Also, the whole mention of miracles, devils and ghosts seem to really set the story in a good supernatural set! :D Well done!
THANKS A LOT FOR THE UPDATE AUTHOR-NIM!^_^
ALTHOUGH YOU HAVE LEFT ME WITH MORE QUESTIONS THAN ANSWERS I AM REALLY DIGGING FOR MORE! XD



I know the past couple of days have really been difficult for us...
It was a really unfortunate incident to occur and as you said, those particular words have certainly left a different imprint on our hearts.
Stay strong author-nim! And don't worry about the story. Take your time to get back in the form.
R.I.P Jonghyun
RockabillyHippie
#4
Chapter 31: Writing has been difficult for me this past week as well. SHINee was one of my first kpop groups because of the Boys Over Flowers ost and that drama had been my second kdrama. The group meant a lot to me. I'm not a huge fan of SM as a company but the artists under them were all my favorites so Jonghyun's passing has thrown me off balance for a lack of a better term. But I'm slowly feeling myself get back to normal, especially because I've been spending time with loved ones. I really loved this chapter especially because we learn more about Jeo Seung and the little girl who we now know is Keres. This is putting me on the edge of my seat!
nuz123
#5
Chapter 31: What is this Jeo Seung?? Who is this lil sister?!
Chimswae
#6
Chapter 30: To see this story unfold this way is giving me a rollecoaster feeling.. it feels so right and just so wrong at the same time. There are so much things going on between jiae and namjoon and yoongi. I am trying to digest every single thing here hahaha guess I am er when it comes to emotional and complicated relationship . U wrote the emotional paet so well. Kudos to you :')
bhatikar
#7
Chapter 30: NOOO!!!NAMJOON!!!!
Get a grip on your thoughts!
Damn! He has given rise to so many MISUNDERSTANDINGS!!

Seriously, this was the most angst and dramatic chapter ever! Strangely....I like it..:P....

But it was heart-wrenching to see all of them getting hurt thought! T^T
Silly Namjoon! He has no idea about Jin Ae's and Yoongi's world, but instead comes up with such theories....even when she told him the truth...I was expecting him to blow-over like that!
Feel really bad for his heart though...he seems so ignorant of the truth and so broken now...
(I was clutching my hair at his assumptions>_<)

And poor Jin Ae, as if her life was not already messed up, now has to deal with these new chaos!
His words sure did seem like bullets ripping her apart from the inside...
And he didn't even here her confession!

While Yoongi is like always! Trying to hush his pain out even if he is dying from the inside in doing so.>_<
Although I'm glad he didn't say anything harsh to Namjoon in anger! He seemed to handle the situation well...
I hope things will turn around for him.....

And last but not the least..Jeo Seung has appeared! Wonder what he is up to with the other guy....:/

The feels of this chapter really got me though!! O_o
You really topped the drama author-nim!! Good Job! ^_^
I seriously would love such more drama from you....But right now, I so want the things to clear up between them!!
(But I'm ready for drama....:P)

Thanks for the update!!<3
BilliePark #8
Chapter 30: Well he really is an idiot for overthinking. That hurts.
RockabillyHippie
#9
Chapter 30: NAMJOON! WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM, MY GUY?! OOOOOOOOHHHHH MMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYYYYY GAAAAAAAHD!!!!!!
HoneyFei20
#10
Chapter 30: Wow...Namjoon made me cry....How can you not understand Jin Ae?????? She loves you and you don't even believe her..... sigh.