The Pen

Pieces of My Aesthetic Heart
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Daehyun and Hana had their fingers intertwined with each other’s as they walk down a park nearby.

“Are you feeling better?” Hana asked as she turned her head to the side to look at Daehyun. He nodded his head. “All thanks to you” Hana smiled.

“Do you want to come over to my place?” Daehyun suddenly asked. Hana raised her eyebrows in surprise.

“N-now?” She stammered. Daehyun smirked. “Yes, now..” He stopped walking and turned his body to face her and leaned in close. “Unless you’re scared…” Hana could feel her cheeks immediately turn red. She stepped back.

“I-I’m not scared..” She replied. Daehyun grinned. “Great. Let’s go then” He pulled on her hand and she quietly followed.

It didn’t take too long to arrive at Daehyun’s place. He lived in a small apartment by himself. His parents live in Busan and he visits them whenever he can.  Daehyun opened the door to his place and entered. Hana followed and she looked around. She was expecting it to be messy for some reason but it was fairly organized and clean. She put her bag on the couch and took a seat. She was quite interested in how everything had it’s own place and it was simple.

“What do you want to drink? Help yourself” Daehyun said.

“It’s okay. I’ll get something later” He shrugged and grabbed a cold water bottle out from the fridge and walked over to plop down next to Hana.

“Why did you invite me to your place?” Hana asked.

Daehyun swallowed a gulp of water and twisted the cap back on.

“Well, I’ve been to your place a couple of times. It’s only fair you come over to mine, right?” He scooted closer to Hana and pulled her in his arms.

“I guess so…”

They stayed the way they were for a while since they fell asleep. Daehyun was the first to wake up and he lifted his head to see Hana was still sleeping soundly on top of his arm. He could feel his arm going numb and losing all sensation. He slowly lifted Hana’s head and placed it carefully on a cushion. He quietly stood up and walked to the bathroom. His phone vibrated in his pockets as he was washing his hands. He quickly dried them off and reached into his pocket

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Vwansha #1
Chapter 20: I’m actually glad they didn’t end uo together. It’s gives off the message of that there are much more opportunities than just that one person you think is going to be with you forever. Like not everything lasts and that it’ll take awhile to find your true love. But life isn’t a drama so it’s gonna be hard and different by a lot. I’m glad they are happy. Maybe at first I would of wanted them to end up together but now not really. Like just reflecting, it wouldn’t have worked out unless the author adds a twist.
thecoolest-changjo
#2
Chapter 20: OH MY GOSH I AM ACTUALLY CRYING. honestly, i loved the ending. im glad that its not one of those happy ever after type of endings! i was lowkey expecting them to get back together but wow, im so happy about the ending. glad that they both got what they wanted but also sad that it wasnt achieved by being together. all in all, i truly love this fic! :( ill miss it
thecoolest-changjo
#3
Chapter 19: oh my goooooooooosh... NOOOOOOO what?! WHATTT?? how could they just break up like that?! my heart is broken for hana, seriously.. mannnnnnn dae needs to figure out what he wants, this is crazy.. )))): YOU CANT JUST LEAVE A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THIS. UPDATE SOON AND I MEAN SOOOONNNN!!
kim_hyesoo37 #4
bye...
Vwansha #5
Chapter 19: Aww that's so sad. She didn't even get to show him the rings she bought specificly for the both of them. I hope Daehyun regrets his decision and feels the guilt.
Vwansha #6
Chapter 17: There is a little drama happening. I feel like Daehyun seems to not be over Soojin because in the previous chapter and this chapter he seems so out of it not the lovey him to Hana. If they do break up and Hana achieves her dream by the abstract painting of her feelings after their break up and Daehyun achieves his dream I wonder how they would feel about one another. Would Daehyun realize he made a mistake breaking up with her or would he be proud she achieved her dream? Also if Daehyun achieved his dream and Hana and Daehyun meet up I wonder what would happen between the two will they get to spend time with one another as friends and develop feelings again? However, I'd think Hana would feel betrayed and not so easy after the break up. Also, I think after their break up Soojin if she does appear again will take the chance and get Daehyun back. That means Daehyun has to figure out his feelings!
thecoolest-changjo
#7
Chapter 17: im confused
thecoolest-changjo
#8
Chapter 16: Oh my goodness. This was emotional. I honestly love the last paragraph. Gave me chills :( i really hope soojin would back off and not ruin daes and hanas relationship. Hopefully dae isnt swayed by her :( but can i just take a moment to comment how you said "not today" as in BTS NOT TODAY AYEE lmfao update soooon.
thecoolest-changjo
#9
Chapter 15: <3<3 so sweet of himm ): seriously this couple is everything right now and im slowly not wanting them to go through hardshipss. update soon :3
thecoolest-changjo
#10
Chapter 14: omggg yaasss finallly a new update!!! ugh can i just say dae and hana are goalssssss ): sigh still getting so nervous about that future angst >< update soon!!!~~