Outtake 2: TBC

Yixing Next Door
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Below is the initial draft of Chapt. 12: Debt collector. So yeah, the story could have gone in a different direction then.

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"Hey _____, where have you been lately? We missed you!"

"Oh hi, Suho Oppa! I haven't been anywhere. I've been cleaning up as usual. Just...that I've gotten a lot more efficient these days so I erm... finish faster? But you guys are back early today?"

"Yeah, everyone missed you so we wrapped up as fast as we can hoping we can catch you before you finish up! You should have seen Yixing hyung today. I've never seen him get ready so quickly! Usually he'll be dilly dallying, wandering around looking for his various stuff that he misplaces... Oh hi hyung! There you are! Just sharing with _____ how cool you were at practice today!" Chen winks at me as he lies to Yixing who's just walked into the living area.

Crap. Yixing's back and I can't make a quick escape as I still got the kitchen to clean up!

"Hi Lay" I pretend-greet Yixing.

He blatantly ignores me and walks right past me and head upstairs! What?!

"Whoa. Guess hyung is in a right mood today?" Chen remarks astonished.

I geddit. Tit-for-tat huh? Yixing's ignoring my presence cause I haven't been responding to his messages I gather? Fine! Have it your way, mister!

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After chatting briefly with Suho, Chen and Xiumin, I proceeded to clean up the kitchen. I'm wiping up the last plate when Yixing shouts from above, "_____! Can you come up for a minute when you're done? I can't seem to find this thumb drive! Where did you pack it?"

"I put all the thumb drives and CDs in the first drawer! Can you see them?"

No response.

"Lay? Lay?"

Still no response.

" I put all the thumb drives and CDs in the first drawer! Can't you see them?" I holler and about to repeat again when I realized I just disrupted the boys from their TV viewing in the living room. Oops.

I whip out my phone and message Yixing: "Put all thumb drives + CDs in 1st drawer. Maybe your thumb drive is there?"

Almost immediately, he replied: "No not there"

"U sure? Could u check again?"

And again, he replied immediately, : "No not there! Get up here."

Why that git! He probably didn't even

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XRC2Sehun #1
Chapter 34: Its really good, enjoyed it :)
XRC2Sehun #2
Chapter 28: Waah!! The story is really cool, loved it...especially the teasing part, i can't stop myself from reading it non stop, its damn good <3
boris92 #3
Chapter 28: OMG why???? Zhang Yixing you smexy-sheep-unicorn, come at me XD

I'll go read the outtakes now.


The only thing that made it awkward was reading my username coz I picked a really random one. Like I'm a fan of the WHO and they had this song called boris the spider on one their albums but I wasn't allowed to make it boristhespider T T so I had to settled for this.

Anyway XD It's nowhere close to my real name so it was kinda funny lmao.


I personally feel it's better to use an OC name for the stories...like Lana from your other fic ^ ^
sbroces #4
just finished reading this omg it was so fun i enjoyed yixing's chabracter here. he was so hilarious at the same time man with raging hormones hahahaha i find my name as well and it's funny i imagined myself really the lead female no doubt i'll be difinitely like her when it comes to yixing omg i remember his y dance all of a sudden doing the floor with body waves kyaaaaaa i need more chaps! thank you for the awesome story it`s like exo next door exo-m version.
yixings24 #5
Chapter 3: Okay, this is so funny! xd my username is ChenLiXing so when I read her name, I started laughing so much :3 Nice story! (Sorry if my English sounds stiff, I'm a Spanish speaker :B)
Beti27 #6
Chapter 35: This story was super hot and funny i love yixing simply because he is so sweet looking but then he turns into a y beast i loved the story!!!;);)
izz_berry #7
Chapter 34: Oh man, i kept fanning myself the entire time. It's so freakin hot and funny, that's a hard combination to have. This makes me appreciate yixing more and more. So awesome!
unicorngirl7 #8
Chapter 34: Thanks for sharing those outtakes! I loved them hehehe And I just loved the story in case I didn't write it hahaha if you're looking for Yixing fics, check out mine if by any chance you haven't read them. I'm not going to say they are good, I'll let you be the judge of that but at least I've had a positive feedback on them ^_^ if you check them out, tell me what you think :D
HaiImEJ #9
Chapter 34: omg! wow! amazing! i just kennot.. that was so great, omg! hahaha
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