My surprised birthday party.?? [part 1]

Never thought i'd fall in love with you [UNFINISHED sorry i've stopped writing this story]

You called a taxi and went home. When you were about to open the
door of your house when someone grabs you and folded your eyes.
You kept strugeling but the guy was to strong for you.
"Am i going to die? what should i do?.."    

Tears started falling from your eyes and the guy put a
handkerchief on your nose and the smell on the
handkechief nocked you down...

You woke up on a bed and the room was all white .
"What's happening?? Am i dead?? Is this hell?
No! Hell is supposed to be black and red right?
so.. I'm in heaven?!"

you heard someone coming in the room and pretended to
be still asleep. You felt that the persone was massaging you.
"WTH?! what's happening here??.."
 Another person went inside the room and were still pretending
to be asleep when you heard them talking : 

"Good morning miss."

"Good morning. Is she still unconcious?"

"I think so..."

"Okay, when she wakes up call me."

"Okay miss."

The voice of the 2nd person who went inside the room was
so familiar to you. You slowly opened your eyes and saw
your bestfriend.

"YAH! KIM EUN MIN!!!. you screamed."

Eun Min tured around and saw you..

-Oh~ hi~! ! i'm busted!"

"Don't you "hi" me! what's this?? How did i get here??"

"ummh.... well we wanted this to be a surprise..."

"We? surprise??"

"Neh, We wanted to throw you a surprised birthday
party but now, you woke up..."

"I thought that you were in New York??"

"Yeah, but i lied. We were talking about this before the vacation..."

"But, who's we???"

"All of us!" 

All of your friends went in the room and explained everything to you....

After they explained everything, you started to cry...

"Why are you crying??" Eunmin said.

"It's because i thought that i was being kiddnap for real!
you really scared me."

"What are we going to do now?" One of your friends said.
"It's not a surprise anymore."

"It's alright!" You said. "I'm just so happy to know that everyone
is here during my 18th birthday." 

"Thank you guys!!"

"YOU'RE WELCOME!!!"

"Let's go?!" You said.

"NO! not yet. You stil don't have an outfit for tonight. Let's GO!"

"You and your other girl friends helped you find an
outfit for tonight while your guy friends went already to finish
the decoration for your party..." 

It took a long time to find an outfit for you....
And you finally found your dress!

You arrived at the party and when you went inside,
all the eyes was looking at you.
You're wearing a Rosette- Appliqué Sleeveless Cocktail Dress
(http://www.yesstyle.com/en/tokyo-fashion-rosette/info.html/pid.1024533249)

"LET'S PARTY!!!" Eunmin said.

 

You were shy because you tought that only your
closest friend was at the party. You grab a seat
and started dringking an iced tea.

"Are you serious??" eunmin said.

"What??"  you said.

"Why are you drinking iced tea???"

"What do you mean?"

"It's your birthday! There's a lot of drinks at the bar and you
decided to drink iced tea. Here!"

"What is this??" You drank it. "OMG! what's this??"

"It's Vodka."

"Look, I'm not a drinker alright!"

"Come on! have some fun! After all it is your birthday!"

"Yeah but i don't wanna drink."

"Do what you want to do, I'm going to dance."

Eun min left you alone then at the other side ,
you saw Donghae with 3 girls sitting next to him.
At first you tought that it's only his friends so you
didn't care and looked away.
Then when you looked at Donghae again,
You saw him kissing one of the girls.
You were thinking that maybe it was his Girlfriend.
When they finished kissing,
the girl and the 2nd girl left him,
and there was only him and the 3rd girl.

"Okay~~??!" you said."This is wierd, what's happening here??"

You looked at him one last time and you saw him kissing the 3rd girl.

"WHAT THE ?!?!?! what is he doing??
does he really have a girlfriend???"

You were shocked and went at the bar to buy a drink.
Then you said: One beer please! at the same time with Donghae.

You turned your head at the oposite direction
'cause you know that it was Donghae.
The bartender gave you a beer and left
when Donghae held your arm.

"Hey, What's your name??" He said.

"I'm Ha Rin. You said as you turned around to face him"

"Ha Rin-ssi?! HEY! i thought that you can't go out tonight??"

"I didn't say that i can't, i said maybe." You said coldly. 

"Oh~ but what brings you here???"

"My friends and i are celebrating my birthday..."

"Really it's your birthday??? why didn't you tell me earlier?"

"Well, my bad..."

"So.. you want to dance??"

"No, i'm not a good dancer."

"It's alright, i'm not either."

He holds your hand while walking towards
the dancefloor, and while you were walking,
every girl was looking at you from head to toe
and started whispering:  Omg! who is she? why is he with her?
A new girlfriend? or a new victim?

I was shocked at the last question that the girls whispered :
"a new victim"??? what do they mean by that??

We were about to dance when the DJ changed the music.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=glLL4kqddiI 
(listen to this while reading..)

You started dancing and couldn't stop
looking at Donghae's beautiful eyes..

"Hey! ."You said". I thought that you didn't know how to dance..?"

"Sorry but this was the only way to make you dance with me."

"Am i supposed to be impressed with that??"

"Maybe..? i don't know, i just want you to dance with me."

You felt that you were begining to blush...
When he was dancing,you couldn't take your eyes of him.........
After the song you wanted to leave but he asked you to stay
dance one more time.
You wanted to say no but when you're eyes met,
it was like you were hypnotised my his eyes..

The DJ changed the music again and this time this was a slow dance

[Listen to this while reading]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wfx76bEtzLk  [sang by Donghae]

or

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wfx76bEtzLk [The original] (<----- i would say this one :P)

 

Donhae holds your waist and you were putting your
hands behind his neck. You were dancing and
looking at each others eyes.

"Did i alredy tell you that you look so beautiful tonight?"

"Not yet, i think..."

"Well, just to be sure....You look beautiful tonight and happy birthday."

"Thank you!" You blushed.

[Your POV]

Are his words true?? Is he lying??
Is he really what i think he is? or not?. Donhae,
i want to know you more but i'm afraid that all
the things that you're saying tonight is all a lie.
Am i really the only girl you think  
who's beautiful tonight? or all of the girls here at the party?...

[end of  POV]

 

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angel116 #1
Chapter 32: Oh please update!
h3d1ez
#2
doonghae<33
iloveelmo23
#3
Chapter 32: happy birthday XD
SujuAnni4-ever
#4
Chapter 32: Happy birthday <3
tirasuilvolume
#5
damn you Yoona! I'm torn... I love both Heechul and Donghae!
SujuAnni4-ever
#6
YoonA I hate you.... I think Heechul is the better one for Harin. Heechul Hwaiting. ^^
tirasuilvolume
#7
NOOOOO YOONA!!!!!
SujuAnni4-ever
#8
Yoona........ I don't like her.
SujuAnni4-ever
#9
Donghae!? What are you doing?!?! Go and say sorry! :D I love this story. Update soon ^^
tirasuilvolume
#10
Donghae you jerk! Don't do this to her! :(
Update soon!!!!! Love this story!