ILYBAE, KIM MINSEOK♥ by JooLuHyun

Title: 6/10

The title doesn't tell me anything other then the fact that it's a love story. Is there anything else in the story that makes it different from any other? 

Story Description: 0/0

There was no story description. This will not be included with the overall grade. 

Character Description: 0/0

There was no character description. This will not be included with the overall grade. 

Graphics: 5/5

Grammar / Vocabulary: 17/25

You used the most common words over and over again. Try to use better words to improve your writing and the story itself. There were also some grammatical errors and run on sentences that could have been fixed if you read it over or used a spell checker.

Story plot / Content: 17/25

I'm not sure if the style of writing was suppose to based on someone's thoughts or if the writing itself was really amateurish. I think that the story could use more describing. You tend to just state something then go off onto something else.

The theme that you used is also very common among other fanfics. If you are going to have the same theme, try to be different by not doing cliché things. Try something exciting like meeting while skydiving or running into each other with one as an assassin and the other as the investigator. Just more outgoing. 

Overall Enjoyment: 13/20

Overall Grade: D