Incompletion by anastasiaeka

Genre: Romance, Drama

Description: Yoona and Yuri used to be a bestfriend, that not when Yoona realized that she had a crush on her friend. It turned complicated, until the day they got into really huge fight, they decided to go separate way. Four years later, when Yoona was about to marry a guy named Donghae, she meet again with Yuri who happened to be her wedding planner. Will her feelings for Yuri surfacing again? Does she ever fall out of love from Yuri from the first place?

Title: 7/10

Normally when I read a one-worded title, it tends to be very vague. Even though I have to admit that it does have a mysterious feel to it, I get no information about the story. The title is the first impression that the reader gets and the title "Incompletion" did not leave a strong mark at all. 

Story Description: 9/10

One of my favorites things to say is "Simple is always the best." Your story description fits that saying. Short, simple, and clean. I really love definitions used in fanfics. The only thing that I ask is to provide a little bit more information. Just a little bit. I just feel like something is missing that I need to know. 

Character Description: 0/0

No Character Description. This will not be included in the overall grade. 

Graphics: 5/5

Wow! 

Grammar / Vocabulary: 14/25

So there were many grammar mistakes. Now I know that you are a non-native speaker and I congratulate you going this way, but points are points. I noticed that you have confusion with past and present tense. There was also confusion with some of the spellings of words. Some sentences were awkwardly structured and some words were left out. I suggest you or somebody else read over this to fix these mistakes. They are really easy to fix. Hopefully when you fix them, you become a better English writer than before. 

Story plot / Content: 18/25

The story plot was fine. A bit unoriginal though. If you are going to have the same theme as most stories, then add something exciting or different. Sometimes I thought that you jumped from idea to another. I also thought that you should describe more. As every English teacher said, "Show, Not Tell." Believe me. I'm sick of hearing that term but it truely helps with writing stories. 

Overall Enjoyment: 17/20

Overall Grade: C