The Wave's Captive [M] by AshleyFang

Genre: , bet, romance

Description: Kim Joonmyeon is a final year high school student, who falls in love with his childhood friend, Kris Wu.

One day, he met Kris in a hotel and the Chinese guy tried to him. He ran from Kris, , and met Luhan in the lift. Luhan offered to bring him out of the place.

Luhan, the rich playboy. He's on his mission to make Joonmyeon falls in love with him. All thanks to his friend, Jongin, who challenged him. If he success in his mission, USD100,000 will be rewarded to him.

What does fate have in store for them?
 

Title: 8/10

The title was interesting. To me, it felt like lots of dramatic events would happen in the story. It really pulled me in.

Story Description: 7/10

Based on the story description only, I don't see how the title relates to the description. The description also told me a little too much. The last sentence was okay but nothing stood out to make me read the story more. 

Character Description: 0/0

There was no character description. This will not be added to the overall grade.

Graphics: 4.5/5

Grammar / Vocabulary: 20/25

The grammar had some present and past tense confusion. Not a lot, but enough that made me reread some sentences over again to fully understand it. The vocabulary was okay. I would like the story more if there was more describing. 

Story plot / Content: 18/25

Again like the grammar/vocabulary grade, I would like more describing. Like my teachers would say "Show, Not Tell." The story idea was also basic. Nothing amazing or different happened that differs from other "bet/challenge" fanfics. 

Overall Enjoyment: 14/20

Organization of the story could be better. 

Overall Grade: C