Flashback

A Love That Never Alters

 

 

"Mianhe, Hyosung-ah. This is the way it has to end ... goodbye."

 

And with those last words, Kikwang walked away ... without turning back, not even once.

 

Frozen under the cold dark winter sky, she watched his retreating figure, her heart broken into pieces, with tears rolling down her cheeks.

 

Hyosung started to hyperventilate. She felt pain. Hyosung pressed her fingers against her temples and started crying. Her heart was aching. Hyosung opened her eyes full of tears, "Why, Kikwang-ah ...? What did I do wrong ...?"

 

Hyosung shook her head, she couldn't stop sobbing, she covered with both her hands and fell to the ground on her knees.  "He left me...he's really gone..." that was all Hyosung was whispering between her sobs.

 

"It's okay, Hyosungie. It's okay ..." she chanted silently, in between tears.

 

Snow started to fall softly around her as she stood there, still staring at the empty space where he just left not long ago. Shivering, she wiped her now dried teary cheeks and started to walk slowly towards the park's exit. 

 

"You'll be all right, Hyosungie," she chanted again.

 

In hoping it'll make her feel better even though she knew it won't go away anytime soon. Clutching to her left chest while biting down her lips, so not to cry again, she softly hit it to calm down her broken heart. She turned around, staring at the empty space.

 

"Goodbye, Kikwang-ah ..."

 

With that, she walked away.

 

 


 

So, this is my very first fanfic! This is cliche, but as a non-native speaker of English, do pardon me on all the mistakes and grammar you'll come across in the future. I will try my best to improve it, so your critics and comments are always welcome! Thank you very much. *bows.

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EnnieSuperman #1
Chapter 22: I'm Linh, i'm from Vietnam.
I just want ask you, can I translate your fic and post in my blog ?
sashaskye91
#2
Chapter 36: I took a longgggg break from fanfics because life just got so busy. =P

This is my first time back and I am really happy that this is the first story I read and finished. I finished the entire story in one reading. I LOVE IT!!!

Amazing storyline. Awesome characters. Love how you satisfy your readers with the different endings. I can't decide which one I love more (I have to say I love the happy ending just because I got to read about their marriage and their kids). This is absolutely one of my favorites. Thank you for giving us a wonderful story.
haidome
#3
I finally got around to reading all of this and I have to say "Curse you for making me cry and feel emotions!!" just kidding. This story was just amazing. I loved both endings!! You are just an awesome writer!! I love you!!!
kitsch
#4
Ahhh, it ended already *wipe tears* I'm sorry for not commenting lately. Couldn't get my hands on the internet. And when I could, the words vaporize from my brain since your sad ending made me overwhelmed. <br />
What more can I say? Great, awesome story, as always. You always amazed me with your words, the way you tell your story, the flow, the angst. You left me speechless.<br />
Did I love the alternate ending? Hell yeap!!! I got a weird flashback as I read this last chapter. Somehow, I suddenly got the urge to read your cookies story XP Yes! I prefer your sweets to your angst~~~ Hahahaha.<br />
Thank you so much for sharing this story here. I hope you will continue to write~~ <br />
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Btw, why didn't you put this as a completed story? There couldn't be a continuation after this right? Oh, oh, oh!
misssecretlover
#5
I actually read the last 'last' chapter a while back but didn't have time to comment. So it's only now that I am lol. so let me tell you where I was reading this ~ on my way to Uni on a bus and hell did I cry, thankfully there were not much people on the bus, cuz I was sobbing.*-* It took me a good half an hour to read it, that was the best bus ride EVER lol. Even though it was a happy ending ~ why do I feel this way, I don't want this to end, I really don't, I want to read about their daily life adventures after this .lolol. but I guess all good things come to an end. <3 ~ I enjoyed reading your story and the amount of emotions I felt during this whole process of reading is just unexplainable. I cried, laughed, smiled, jumped etc. It was truly a touching story <3 and If this could get published, I'd be the first ones to buy it ^^ lol. both endings were outstanding, but obviously for me the happy ending wins ~ ^^. <br />
AWESOME AMAZING OUTSTANDING PERFECT story ~ thank you so much!! ~ THANK YOU. Can't wait to read more of your stories <3 ~ <br />
Kisung all the way ~ ^^<br />
littleflowerpot Fighting!! <3