missghean (Coffee Stained Pawprints)

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Coffee Stained Pawprints

by missghean

 

Title :   10/10

The title is very creative and it looks original enough

 

Foreword / Description :   17/20

The description is short. Honestly, if I'm just a random reader that happens to scroll pass your story, I won't read it. Just saying.

 

Grammar/Spelling:   25/30

There wasn't much mistake so far~ Pretty good

1) They usually got out in pairs while the other two left in the coffee shop will accommodate the customers.

2) You rubbed the towel against your hair and did the same to the dog after; hoping that it would dry the its thick fur.

 

Plot :  9/10

I love how you make Suho on your bed. LOL And the fact that Suho is a wolf.. -nods nods- Interesting~

 

Story flow :   10/10

It's only two chapters but I could be able to understand the story well.

 

Characters combination (?) :   19/20

Muah. Guardian Angel Suho <3

 

Bonus    9/10

I love your story. Even if you're on hiatus now... I'll subscribe!

 

Total :  99 /110

This story is pretty awesome and interesting c: Keep it up!

Don't forget to credit the shop!

 

 

 

©inspiritfriend

 

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IDOthoughts
#1
Chapter 21: Thank you for your review ^^

I did mean to write, just after noon, as in just after 12 :3
and it was a safe haven, you now like Eden :p

What do you mean about comma?

I don't get what you mean about spoilers?
IDOthoughts
#2
Username: IDOthoughts
link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/266010
Story name: Clouds
link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/528370
Length: 11 chapters so far. It's still ongoing ^^

English is not my native language, and if you have any ideas/surgestions of how I can write my foreword better and other things I'm open, and I can always use constructive critique!

Thank you~
electrifyme
#3
Btw I'll credit you tomorrow, I'm currently in mobile.
electrifyme
#4
Chapter 19: Thanks. :DD
electrifyme
#5
Username : Khaireenhilda
Profile Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/360866
Story Title : Holding On
Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/560262/holding-on-angst-betrayal-drama-friendship-kyuhyun-oneshot-romance
Story Length : Oneshot (completed)
InfinityGirl
#6
Chapter 18: Woah. You're quick! Thanks for the review!~
InfinityGirl
#7
Username : InfinityGirl
Profile Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/535973
Story Title : Library Stalker
Story Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/587744/library-stalker-fluff-romance-twoshot-you-exo-suho-library
Story Length : Oneshot (completed)
xhoneybae #8
Username : BabyJEJPink
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Story Title : Live Together With My EX?!
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Story Leght : 3 chapters (on going)