Abhor [click for link]

by jjang017

Title :  9 /10

I've never seen this title before so it's unique in my opinion.

Foreword / Description :   18/20

The description is just beautifully written, and I believe it'll attract reader's attention.

Grammar/Spelling:  27 /30

You did make some mini mistakes but it's unnoticable.

Plot :  9/10

The originality of this story plot is cool. It gives off a very sadist yet pessimistic feeling. It does send me chills when I thought of her talking to the Augustine.

Story flow :   8/10

Since this is basically a one-shot, the story flow doesn't really matter. But I could be able to understand it so it's fine.

Characters combination (?) :   20/20

Although I don't really like Ladiescode their songs are awesome. I'm not going to lie saying I knew them but after reading your fic, I search them up in the internet and find Sojung cute. OTL

Bonus :   10/10

I love your story overall. Keep it up and writing more interesting fics in the future! c:

Total :  101 /110

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