Library Stalker

by InfinityGirl

Title :   10/10

There isn't any story with this title yet, so it's unique. And I would definitely check the fic out by the title.

Foreword / Description :   19/20

The description and foreword is just enought to attract readers. Good job!~

Grammar/Spelling:   27/30

Your spelling is fine but try to work out with your grammar. I'll let it pass since English isn't your first language.

Plot :  8/10

I couldn't say that this story was originally by you since it's quite common and cliche to say. But it was good as a starter.

Really love how the way you put the OC as a stalker.

Suho likes her back, didn't he? Awwww

Story flow :   9/10

Couldn't give full because it happened to quickly? Since it's a oneshot, I'll give you 9.

Characters combination (?) :   20/20

Nothing much to say. You used Suho as the main character!~ Woots. ^^v

Bonus    10/10

I really loved this storyline and keep it up. I heard you're planning on a sequel?

You totally should!

Total :   103/110

Good luck in your sequel!~

Don't forget to credit the shop!~

©inspiritfriend