Coffee Shop Down the Street [click for link]

by carelesswhispers

Title :  9 /10

Although the title isn't very eye catching, but since its related to the story plot, it's fine.

Foreword / Description :  18 /20

You described the necessaries of the characters only and it's good. I'm able to understand them well.

Grammar/Spelling:   24/30

I actually spotted several minor mistakes...

1) He repeated looking into my eyes this time and smiling. smiled.

2) After that little incident, he's continues to talk He's been talking nonstop to me in and outside of class.

3) It's making me kind of... different. (Make it 'confused/curious/weird' would be better.)

Try not to repeat the same mistakes again in the future.

Plot :  9/10

The story looks originally from you and it's interesting. But by the way I read this fic, it sound more like a fluff fic than a angst tbh. *w* And one thing. The poster does not really suit the fic. But if you're making it angst later on, don't change it.

Story flow :  8 /10

I see that you like to take things fast. But i prefer it this way. Cause some authors are just beating around the bush.

Characters combination (?) :   19/20

Daehyun is actually my bias from B.A.P so yeah~ Kekeke

Bonus   9 /10

I can say that this is actually the best Daehyun fic I've read. Keep it up!

Total :  96 /110

This is just my personal thought. If you think it's low, I'm sorry.

Don't forget to credit the shop~

©inspiritfriend