Room 403 [Click for link]

by littledancingmachine

Title :   9/10

The title is good although it's quite common. May I ask why is it 403?

Foreword / Description :   18/20

Your description is short and simple yet brings a huge meaning. Good job!

Grammar/Spelling:   30/30

According to the three chapters I read, there isn't any grammar nor spelling mistakes. Keep up with it!

Plot :  9/10

I couldn't say that the plot was originally written by you, since i read all lot off fics just like this.

Hope you could make some interesting twist and turns in the middle.

Story flow :   9/10

The story flow is just the way I like it.

Characters combination (?) :   17/20

Chanyeol and J-Hope~ Emm <3 Kyah!

Bonus   8 /10

I love your story! Good luck in updating your fic!

Total :  100/110

You just gain a new subby <3 <3 Haha

I appologize for my improfessional reveiws.

Remember to credit the shop! c:

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