designer101 (My Sketchbook is Alive)
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by designer101
Title : 10/10
Although at first I thought it was kinda spooky for having an alive sketchbook. LOL
Foreword / Description : 19/20
I love your description. tbh. It tells me all the suspenses and i'm curios on how you're going to go on.
Grammar/Spelling: 29/30
Nah. You did not make any mistakes so far (or maybe I missed them? XD)
But the change the character's name. I think you made a mini spelling mistakes. You wrote Choi Kyungmi instead of Cha Kyungmi.
Plot : 10/10
i can see that it is originally written by you. (Maybe?) It's getting more interesting the more I read it.
Story flow : 9/10
I like the way you take things. Not too fast and not too slow.
Characters combination (?) : 18 /20
Kyahhh <3 I just love Kris and Xiumin <3 well actually everyone in EXO.
Bonus 8/10
I'll wait for your update. And I will upvote your story too c:
Total : 103 /110
Kekeke you got the highest marks currently c: Aren't you just happy? Jkjkjk
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©inspiritfriend
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