designer101 (My Sketchbook is Alive)

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My Sketchbook is Alive

by designer101

 

 

Title :   10/10

Although at first I thought it was kinda spooky for having an alive sketchbook. LOL

 

Foreword / Description :   19/20

I love your description. tbh. It tells me all the suspenses and i'm curios on how you're going to go on.

 

Grammar/Spelling:   29/30

Nah. You did not make any mistakes so far (or maybe I missed them? XD)

But the change the character's name. I think you made a mini spelling mistakes. You wrote Choi Kyungmi instead of Cha Kyungmi.

 

Plot :  10/10

i can see that it is originally written by you. (Maybe?) It's getting more interesting the more I read it.

 

Story flow :   9/10

I like the way you take things. Not too fast and not too slow.

 

Characters combination (?) :  18 /20

Kyahhh <3 I just love Kris and Xiumin <3 well actually everyone in EXO.

 

Bonus    8/10

I'll wait for your update. And I will upvote your story too c:

 

Total :  103 /110

Kekeke you got the highest marks currently c: Aren't you just happy? Jkjkjk

Don't forget to credit my shop!

 

 

 

 

©inspiritfriend

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IDOthoughts
#1
Chapter 21: Thank you for your review ^^

I did mean to write, just after noon, as in just after 12 :3
and it was a safe haven, you now like Eden :p

What do you mean about comma?

I don't get what you mean about spoilers?
IDOthoughts
#2
Username: IDOthoughts
link:http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/266010
Story name: Clouds
link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/528370
Length: 11 chapters so far. It's still ongoing ^^

English is not my native language, and if you have any ideas/surgestions of how I can write my foreword better and other things I'm open, and I can always use constructive critique!

Thank you~
electrifyme
#3
Btw I'll credit you tomorrow, I'm currently in mobile.
electrifyme
#4
Chapter 19: Thanks. :DD
electrifyme
#5
Username : Khaireenhilda
Profile Link : http://www.asianfanfics.com/profile/view/360866
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Story Length : Oneshot (completed)
InfinityGirl
#6
Chapter 18: Woah. You're quick! Thanks for the review!~
InfinityGirl
#7
Username : InfinityGirl
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Story Leght : 3 chapters (on going)