Femme Fatale [Click for link]

by TheLandofBrownSugar

Title :   9/10

The title looks classy~ Mind explaining what it means?

Foreword / Description :   18/20

The description is so far so good. That's the only thing I could say.

Grammar/Spelling:   27/30

1) Riiiight....

2) As soon as hers eyes met mine, they looked away once again.

Your spelling seems fine. And there's nothing wrong with your grammar.

Plot :  9/10

The plot is interesting and it looks original enough.

Story flow :  8 /10

Since it's one-shot, there's nothing much to write about the story flow.

Characters combination (?) :  19 /20

In my own opinion, I don't actually prefer girlxgirl... but I do ship Sunsoo couple~ kekeke

Bonus    8/10

A Sone here~ So emm c:

Total :   98/110

Sorry if you think it's low. -bows-

And all the best in writing more SNSD fanfics in the future~ :D

Don't forget to credit the shop!

©inspiritfriend