Holding On

by Khaireenhilda

Title :   10/10

The title connects to  the story very well with Kyuhyun holding onto his past and his relationship with Seoyoung without letting go.

Foreword / Description :   18/20

The description was short. To be honest, it's quite short but giving little phrase like this is already enough.

Unlike any other stories who wrote long description about the characters' bio and stuffs which pretty tells you everything about the fic.

Grammar/Spelling:   29/30

There isn't any grammar and spelling mistakes. (Not if I missed them.) They're not noticable so I'll let it pass but I did find a few.

"I guess I'll to start accept that fact."

- "I guess I'll start to accept that fact."

"He froze to the spot."

- "He froze in his spot."

You're pretty good in English and I love the way you write it. It's easier to read and understand.

Plot :  9/10

The plot is good and it have a reality feel about this society.

But. after five years of not seeing each other and then, coincidencely they met at the Han River is like a plot of a drama.

Story flow :   10/10

I enjoy reading your story a lot. The flashback and memories is just plain good.

Characters combination (?) :   18/20

Couldn't give you full. It might be because the Cho Kyuhyun I know from Super Junior isn't that romantic instead, he's an evil maknae. But, I know I shouldn't judge a book by its cover. ^^

Bonus    10/10

I actually prefer reading angst than fluff fics. So yeah.

Total :   104/110

I totally enjoy reading this and thanks for requesting!

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