Live Together With My EX?!

by babyjejpink

Title :   8/10

It would be better if you would work on your title. It's fine actually but use 'Living Together With My EX?!' instead of  'Live Together With My EX?!'

Foreword / Description :   16/20

The foreword isn't much to be honest, I couldn't understand much about it.

Something like this would better at my point of view. Add in more words for the readers to understand more. :D

'Why did I fell in love with you again? You're not the same anymore... Why?'

[This is the Eunji's POV isn't it?]

Grammar/Spelling:   22/30

Okay, so here is it. Firstly, your spellings.

Fammiliar - Familiar

Bad - I think you meant Bed.

I assume you don't double check what you wrote. I can totally understand you cuz I don't do it myself. c:

Your grammars, not to say it's bad but yeah.

1) and Eunji is rushing ed down and   to   seeing there's a boy, standing at the doorstep. His height is probably around 175cm.

2) The boy who has been looking at his shoes the whole time, despite the nervousness he's feeling,  looked up and was shocked to see Eunji.because he's so nervous looking and Eunji with shock face.

3) Yoseob and Eunji decided to walk by their own even separately although their classes are just is next to each other.  then suddenly But, on the way to their class...

Reminder : Remember to put a full stop at the end of your sentence.

And if you're switching POV, please state there so it won't confuse the readers.

Plot :  10/10

The plot, althought it is quite common but yeah. I believe it's your own idea and it's quite good.

Story flow :   9/10

I couldn't really say much about this since there's only 3 chapters but it's going well, i guess?

Characters combination (?) :   19/20

Hahaha. Yoseob <3 Not really a big fan of Eunji but she's okay...

Bonus    10/10

I hope you'll update soon and I'm curious on what will happen next to Yoseob. ^*^

Total :   94/110

Don't forget to credit the shop and I sincerely apologize if you think I'm rude.

I'm sorry.

Ps: Sorry for correcting your sentences too much.

But, good luck in updating! c: